well it was a bw class and the mf camera had ruined two cable releases i tought i'll pull out the d70 and to realzie that the mf tripod doesn't fit the d70 mounting....don't things ever work out for me:X
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my sad attempt at still life
yeah more titled image ahoy!
well it was a bw class and the mf camera had ruined two cable releases i tought i'll pull out the d70 and to realzie that the mf tripod doesn't fit the d70 mounting....don't things ever work out for me:X Life's pretty straight without drifting
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i think you've got the idea right... but the piece which you are focusing on needs to be tack sharp... otherwise the story doesn't work.
cheers http://www.markcrossphotography.com - A camera, glass, and some light.
yeah the hand holding didn't help out too well. i hope the 120 film developed out ok.
Life's pretty straight without drifting
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Hi
I could not make out what the primary subject. Perhaps you can consider put the black "King" in sharp focus and surround it with attacking pieces - blurry white pieces ... like in a check fashion.
You could also add in a white attacking piece (within DOF) showing the fingers of the opponents moving the piece to an attacking position. regards, Arthur
Redline,
It must be difficult to use that well practised panning technique of yours will subjects that don't move. Cheers Dean I intend to live forever. So far, so good.
D2x | Nikkor 24-120vr & 50/1.8 | Sigma 12-24 & 24-70/2.8 & 70-200/2.8 | SB800 | Velbon 640CF Tripod w/ Markins M10 & RRS plates. And then there's my Bag Collection... Sweeet....;-)
interesting shot
are the pieces on a board? as soon as i see chess pieces, i try to work out what the next move should be, but this doesn't look to be on a board i like yeosca's idea of putting the fingers of an opponent in to add tension
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