The simple pleasures of being a kid

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The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby Reschsmooth on Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:47 am

Trying to stop a kid from jumping on the bed is hard.

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C&C appreciated. The composition was difficult as I was trying to keep the camera still but didn't know which way Alex was going to run.
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby Mr Darcy on Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:12 am

Reschsmooth wrote:Trying to stop a kid from jumping on the bed is hard.

Nahh! Just tell 'em they have to do it. Then when they complain, relent and say they don't have to after all unless they are bad. :lol:

The drape is unfortunate. As is the top of the head. Maybe try some of Peter's cloning tricks. I see you were at 19mm on a 17-35mm lens. Perhaps use the lens at its widest, then crop for composition next time.
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby Reschsmooth on Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:16 pm

Greg, good points. The cropping was just a bit lazy as I had space above his head.

To pull you up on something...they don't reach the ground, hence they are curtains, not drapes. :D
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby aim54x on Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:52 pm

Other than the cropping already noted, it is a great action capture...I hope no kids were hurt in the production of this image
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby Matt. K on Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:28 pm

Technically a beautiful image....I would have liked to see more space around the kid.....I think in this case you got too close, (or cropped too tight). Love the hair! And it is so sharp! Nice!
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby dawesy on Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:40 pm

While composition could be slightly stronger in the ways already covered, I think this a great capture of a moment. The most important part of making this work was timing and you nailed that! Looks like he was having fun as well ;)
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:39 am

Thanks everyone. I will see what I can do about the cropping at the top of the image. I recall I was going for a square crop, which didn't work and then, lazily, settled on this one. There was no further room to the right hand side (camera's point of view) and going to 17mm wouldn't have given much more - the camera was in portrait mode. I was also almost as far back as I could go, from memory (this was last Friday, after all!).
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby biggerry on Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:31 am

I am gonna buck the trend here - I actually like the image as it is (in terms of crop and composition) the slightly off centre position of the subject and chopping off of the head and positioning to the right of the frame all give that sense of a uncommanded leap off the bed, a sense of a spontaneous capture... :up:

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lol, I tried this reverse psychology but it don't work, for example "here, press all the buttons on the stereo I don't mind" or "sure how about we bash the TV with the farm blocks". I don't watch much TV or listen to much music now :|
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby Geoff on Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:18 am

Not compositionally perfect for the stated reasons but still a top shot! :)
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Re: The simple pleasures of being a kid

Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Feb 09, 2011 2:32 pm

I think its great how it is, can can't believe how big Alex is now! Wow!
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