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Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...As it turned out no spectacular sunrise - in fact no sunrise to speak of at all
NIKON D90 + 17.0-50.0 mm f/2.8 @ 17 mm, 13 sec at f / 22, ISO 200 + CPL Playing with the white balance NIKON D90 + 17.0-50.0 mm f/2.8 @ 17 mm, 6 sec at f / 22, ISO 200 + CPL (psst - don't look at Gerry's...) NIKON D90 + 17.0-50.0 mm f/2.8 @ 17 mm, 10 sec at f / 22, ISO 200 + CPL NIKON D90 + 17.0-50.0 mm f/2.8 @ 17 mm, 6 sec at f / 22, ISO 200 + CPL Last edited by Remorhaz on Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:59 am, edited 1 time in total.
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You got conned,. Gerry puts up a really colourfull effort last week to just to get you guys outta bed and he serves up this rubbish Looks like you had a bit of fun with the white balance on these. #1 and #3 get my vote provided you fix the bent horizon in 3. Not keen on 2 at all
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Done D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
Re: Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...#3 is almost there I reckon. I would suggest some '+++clarity' on the rocks and '---clarity' on the water. [next time use a slightly longer shutter ] with an overall saturation boost, +0.5 EV overexposure and mild contrast (or blacks) boost.
#2 would you consider BW? PS: your pictures look soft due to 'forum softnening'. I would suggest that you resize to 775 with sharpening in LR set to screen-medium. Some people can overlook this (and compensate) but for others it hits them on the face when an image is soft...
Re: Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...I like the first three Rodney. Maybe reduce the blue of #2
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Re: Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...
I'd done that (at least on the water on the right) - I added a bit more to the rocks now
Yeah I know - wonder what shutter Gerry used for his?
added a little now
I'd already done that too (well +0.35EV - more you reckon?) however I added a little more blacks now
Thanks I'll take a look at that and I've also switched to 775 (and adjusted my LR export settings) - so am I to understand that even though the forums rules list 800 pixel wide images as the limit that they actually get resized down to 775 pixels when displayed on the forum? D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
Re: Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...Great work! Love the first and third one.
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Rodney - My Photo Blog Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
Re: Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...I quite like the first, however the BW version of the second has potential imo - push the contrast and crop a bit off the bottom might improve it.
I thinks it just a little bug where even if a image is 800px wide it still cops the forum resize which is not flattering for sharpness. By resizing to 775 it means your image will not be touched by the forum resize and maintains its original look. You can also just click thru to see the un-resized version too.
lol, yeah my track record is pretty crap, I am surprised you and Suren still turn up after the malabar session! gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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That certainly was a classic one.
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great suggestion Amhed, just love this as a mono. EM1 l 7.5 l 12-40 l 14 l 17 l 25 l 45 l 60 l 75 l AW1 l V3
Re: Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...You're developing a nice style Gerry.
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Re: Gerry's Sun Don't Shine in Maroubra Shoot...FYI: I've reworked the last two images (I didn't like the colour in the rocks mostly)
oh and here's my streaming water one NIKON D90 + 17.0-50.0 mm f/2.8 @ 17 mm, 1.6 sec at f / 22, ISO 200 + CPL D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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