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Ladies of Colour...I was walking along George St in the city (Sydney) around lunchtime when I saw these two ladies wearing brightly coloured summer dresses waiting at the intersection to cross amidst a sea of drab whites, blacks and greys (mostly people wearing business clothes). As we were crossing I got a lovely flick of the hair and here we are.
I used the local adjustment brush in Adobe Lightroom to post process the image as you see it here - I firstly used a large hard brush over the whole image to reduced the Saturation, Clarity and Sharpness all to -100 and I then used the Erase brush with Auto Mask to "paint" the two women back in and then touched up the edges a little. NIKON D90 + 17.0-50.0 mm f/2.8 @ 17 mm, 1/160 sec at f / 5.6, ISO 200 As always feedback most welcome. D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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Re: Ladies of Colour...I really like this shot. Love the selectove colour although i think having both girls in colour reduces the impact personally. Id like to see it with just the flikcing hair girl in colour to give a very strong focal point.
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Re: Ladies of Colour...Lovely.
I'm not usually a fan of selective colour, but here it works a treat. Well done. TFF (Trevor)
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Re: Ladies of Colour...I like this as well Rodney. You are certainly giving the street thing a good go.
Still can't bring myself to try it. Regards Colin
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Re: Ladies of Colour...
Thanks - I still havn't worked up to stopping random people in the street and asking them if I can take their picture... when I want to try a staged portrait rather than totally candid... D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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Re: Ladies of Colour...I agree with the general comments. Not normally a fan of selective colour, I think it works well here, emphasised, in a way, by the slight angle.
I notice you tend to photograph pretty girls from behind? Regards, Patrick
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Re: Ladies of Colour...
So, why go the selective colour route? What you've described sounds like it occurred naturally, so why not leave it at that? Or maybe a slight desat? g.
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Re: Ladies of Colour...While I understand what you were trying to communicate IMHO I think it would be better if you kept it in colour. Without seeing the original it's hard to make suggestions besides increasing the contrast or burning in the background.
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Re: Ladies of Colour...
The original... A slight desat might have worked - however since I was playing with this technique (might even be the first time) I took it to the max to see where it would go and I liked the results... D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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Re: Ladies of Colour...i dont like the colour version
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Re: Ladies of Colour...
Nor do I - it's too busy and my ladies don't stand out enough - like I "felt" they did when I first saw them in the crowd on the street corner - thus my attempt to "rescue" the feeling I had when I first took the shot. D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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The first one makes them really stand out 7D, 60D, 70-200mm f/4LIS, 17-50mm f/2.8, 10-22mm f/3.5-4.5, 50mm f/1.4, 100mm f/2.8 Macro, 580EX II
Re: Ladies of Colour...Although the first impression by the first version was good, that did not last because of the weird look of the background. Good idea though...
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