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Ladies of Colour...

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:15 am

I was walking along George St in the city (Sydney) around lunchtime when I saw these two ladies wearing brightly coloured summer dresses waiting at the intersection to cross amidst a sea of drab whites, blacks and greys (mostly people wearing business clothes). As we were crossing I got a lovely flick of the hair and here we are.

I used the local adjustment brush in Adobe Lightroom to post process the image as you see it here - I firstly used a large hard brush over the whole image to reduced the Saturation, Clarity and Sharpness all to -100 and I then used the Erase brush with Auto Mask to "paint" the two women back in and then touched up the edges a little.

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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby chrisk on Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:13 pm

I really like this shot. Love the selectove colour although i think having both girls in colour reduces the impact personally. Id like to see it with just the flikcing hair girl in colour to give a very strong focal point.
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby the foto fanatic on Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:59 pm

Lovely.

I'm not usually a fan of selective colour, but here it works a treat.

Well done. :D
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby colin_12 on Mon Feb 28, 2011 11:30 pm

I like this as well Rodney. You are certainly giving the street thing a good go.
Still can't bring myself to try it.
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:58 am

colin_12 wrote:I like this as well Rodney. You are certainly giving the street thing a good go.
Still can't bring myself to try it.


Thanks - I still havn't worked up to stopping random people in the street and asking them if I can take their picture... when I want to try a staged portrait rather than totally candid...
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:18 am

I agree with the general comments. Not normally a fan of selective colour, I think it works well here, emphasised, in a way, by the slight angle.

I notice you tend to photograph pretty girls from behind? :)
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby gstark on Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:00 am

Remorhaz wrote:I was walking along George St in the city (Sydney) around lunchtime when I saw these two ladies wearing brightly coloured summer dresses waiting at the intersection to cross amidst a sea of drab whites, blacks and greys (mostly people wearing business clothes)


So, why go the selective colour route?

What you've described sounds like it occurred naturally, so why not leave it at that? Or maybe a slight desat?
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby PiroStitch on Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:00 am

While I understand what you were trying to communicate IMHO I think it would be better if you kept it in colour. Without seeing the original it's hard to make suggestions besides increasing the contrast or burning in the background.
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:43 pm

gstark wrote:What you've described sounds like it occurred naturally, so why not leave it at that? Or maybe a slight desat?


PiroStitch wrote:While I understand what you were trying to communicate IMHO I think it would be better if you kept it in colour. Without seeing the original it's hard to make suggestions besides increasing the contrast or burning in the background.


The original... A slight desat might have worked - however since I was playing with this technique (might even be the first time) I took it to the max to see where it would go and I liked the results...

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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby chrisk on Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:10 pm

i dont like the colour version
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Mar 02, 2011 7:33 am

Rooz wrote:i dont like the colour version


Nor do I - it's too busy and my ladies don't stand out enough - like I "felt" they did when I first saw them in the crowd on the street corner - thus my attempt to "rescue" the feeling I had when I first took the shot.
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby dviv on Wed Mar 02, 2011 7:57 am

Rooz wrote:i dont like the colour version

:agree:

The first one makes them really stand out :up:
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Re: Ladies of Colour...

Postby glamy on Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:03 pm

Although the first impression by the first version was good, that did not last because of the weird look of the background. Good idea though...
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