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Pretty fungi

Postby colin_12 on Sat Mar 26, 2011 10:56 pm

Actually managed to take a few pics today as there was plenty to see.
I would like critique on these, especially the composition.


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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby biggerry on Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:54 pm

Composition in teh last is by far the best in my opinion, this is a great image for both the technical side of things but also has some arty-ness too it, the inclusion of the bark and the speck of green works well, the angle perfectly shows the fins off, I definitely could not do it better :up:

The first has artistic merit, but comes across very flat due to the straight on composition.

The second, its been done before Colin :wink: good technical coverage but I know you could spice that up with a bit of angle or a diagonal composition to give it a more dynamic feel.
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby surenj on Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:20 pm

To add to Gerry's comments.

What if you had another light rim lighting the outlines?
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby colin_12 on Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:51 pm

Thanks Fellas,
I like your idea Suren, I should try more with the lighting side of things. :cheers:
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Mar 28, 2011 9:20 am

I like #2 (esp on dark black) - although the bright stuff at the front is perhaps too distracting. Agree that #3 is the best for me however if it was me I'd dial down the bark on the right.
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Mar 28, 2011 9:39 am

Very nice shots - I like the standard in number two, and agree with Suren's suggestion.

Seeing all these fungi shots reminds me of Journey to the Centre of the Earth (the 1959 version!)
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby Geoff M on Mon Mar 28, 2011 11:09 am

I could not have done any better with these, in fact i probably would not have made an image of them at all as I would not have seen the subjects in the first place!

I like the second, purely because of the colours, but the third is the stand out for me.
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby chrisk on Mon Mar 28, 2011 6:55 pm

i never knew such beautiful fungi existed ! so thanks for sharing and giving us an insight. love the second 2. really like the orange lava lamps. the leaf is too obtrusive in the first, shame cos the colour is spectacular.
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby colin_12 on Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:38 pm

Rooz wrote:i never knew such beautiful fungi existed !


You just need to be in the right place at the right time.

Geoff M wrote:I would not have seen the subjects in the first place!


Come with us next time and we can fix that for you.
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby aim54x on Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:46 pm

#2 is wonderful....yes the composition can be improved...but it is still awesome!
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Re: Pretty fungi

Postby stubbsy on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:29 pm

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#3 is the standout for me. The low composition and the framing really throws the scale wonderfully out of whack for me - I keep seeing fungi the size of palm trees silhouetted against the city skyline - which really makes me look much more closely at the image than I would otherwise. Well done.
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