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Afternoon visitor

Postby CraigVTR on Sat Apr 16, 2011 8:25 pm

This fellow visited the house today. He/she hung around for a few hours making it's way nearly all the way around the house back to where it satrted it's trip. It got a agitated when I started poking a lens in front of it but stayed in the one spot long enough for me to get some shots with the 24-70 then change to the 105 micro.

This shot is a pretty heavy crop. Does it work?
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I was a bit limited in the angle from which I could shoot, is the composition ok?

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Re: Afternoon visitor

Postby aim54x on Sat Apr 16, 2011 11:44 pm

It's all in the eyes, and you have captured its gaze in #1 beautifully. I am not sure if I would have poked a lens at it, but you have done yourself some proud here!
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Re: Afternoon visitor

Postby CraigVTR on Sun Apr 17, 2011 12:18 pm

Thanks Cameron. The first one is a fairly heavy crop with the camera about 500-600mm away from the snake. He was showing the blue flecks on the body which indicate he is a little disturbed, but being a non venomous Common Tree Snake it tends to make me fairly relaxed.
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Afternoon visitor

Postby Mal on Sun Apr 17, 2011 5:49 pm

I like them both, but as mentioned the eyes in number one really sells the shot.
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Re: Afternoon visitor

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Apr 17, 2011 8:54 pm

Yes #1 nice a good :)

The eye in #2 looks - well - strange :)
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Re: Afternoon visitor

Postby colin_12 on Sun Apr 17, 2011 11:11 pm

Nice work on these.
They do still bite if they feel inclined. :up:
I too prfer #1
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Re: Afternoon visitor

Postby surenj on Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:42 pm

#1 is brilliant! Great eye contact. You'd wish that you had that nose also in focus but you have done exceedingly well to even capture any of these pictures!

#2 I like this composition.

CraigVTR wrote:He/she hung around for a few hours making it's way nearly all the way around the house back to where it satrted it's trip.

:shock: Were you letting it run rampant while you made coffee and perhaps cooked dinner?? :wink:
In my limited experience the main worry is when they dissapear into the house...... :mrgreen:
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Re: Afternoon visitor

Postby Big Red on Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:34 pm

is that a Tick below its eye ?
no wonder it was agitated :lol:
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