Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Postby biggerry on Mon Apr 11, 2011 11:52 pm

Well it was certainly an interestign morning out, great to spend time with fellow photographers and meet new ones too!

Conditions were tought to work with, however as suren is probably sick of me saying - ya gotta work with what ya got!

Given there was quite an amount of traffic here its only natural to try and utilise these peeps to anchor and scale the compositions. Which as it turned out, pretty easy since you could point ya camera in any direction and you were guaranteed a pleb in the shot :wink:

Anyway - I did try a few different things and utilise the unique nature of what we had that morning, specifically the low tide and great access to lots of slippery green sh$t.

I am interested in thoughts on these and the processing - good bad ugly or indifferent.

Image

Image

Image

I am trying to master this business of taking pictures directly into the sun...

Image
gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
User avatar
biggerry
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5930
Joined: Tue May 13, 2008 12:40 am
Location: Under the flight path, Newtown, Sydney

Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Postby Wink on Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:53 am

All top notch as usual Gerry.

The last image is the one that appeals to me the most.
Adam.
MY PHOTOS
Allows Image Editing
User avatar
Wink
Senior Member
 
Posts: 911
Joined: Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:23 pm
Location: Seymour, VIC

Re: Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Apr 12, 2011 10:33 am

I like the idea of the first - I'd kinda want more or less of the reflection in the still water if you know what I mean - i.e. more reflected blue or much less (CPL?) so you could see "into" the pond. I think you could also crop that far right to remove the large distracting flare.

#3 is OK and I have some like this too but I think the boring skies screwed those for us

#4 is that other view I was talking about with our pond and I too quite like this one - it's a pity the main flare is right over that really interesting green stuff - it would have been nice to see right in there clearly at it (CPL again?) - BTW: what is the go with CPL with the Lee Filters - do you put on a CPL before the Lee stuff and then work out how to rotate the CPL and not move it whilst rotating the Lee stuff or is there some form of Lee CPL thingy (not sure how that would work)?
D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog
Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
User avatar
Remorhaz
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2547
Joined: Thu Apr 29, 2010 8:14 pm
Location: Sydney - Lower North Shore - D600

Re: Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Postby stubbsy on Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:03 pm

Gerry

#4 is the best here. It makes great use of botht eh sun and the water and for once (in my case) the lens flare adds to rather than subtracts from the shot
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Re: Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Postby colin_12 on Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:48 pm

I like the first two in a "this is about photography" or advertising photography sense. Great images.

The third and fourth are nice long foreground leading shots that work really well for me. Noice.
Regards Colin
Cameras, lenses and a lust for life
User avatar
colin_12
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1853
Joined: Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:10 pm
Location: Hazelbrook

Re: Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Postby surenj on Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:22 pm

#1 Nice composition and don't you wish they the fellow was carrying a fishing rod on his shoulder.. :wink: The oranges on the cliff appear to a little blown or something ( iwas not happy with my photos of this either..it appeared textureless and it was hard to wring out any textture out of it

#2 the most pleasing image I reckon. The balance of light is just right. Nice compo and foregorund detail. The winner of the lot.

#3 weakest composition I reckon.

#4 Nice composition again. I don't mind most of the flare but the triangular flare in the middle of the pool distracts from the pool which is the main subject. The smaller flare dots and the bit the right lower doesn't distract. Tricky lighting on this one and you have done well to get any picture! :wink: Usually once the sun is out, it's very hard to include it in the frame and get away with it...
User avatar
surenj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7197
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:21 pm
Location: Artarmon NSW

Re: Peak Hour Traffic @ North Turimetta

Postby dervish16 on Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:51 pm

I think I like #2 the most. Love how the water draining out from the rocks directs your eyes out into the ocean. Good work.
User avatar
dervish16
Member
 
Posts: 138
Joined: Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:43 pm
Location: Kiama Downs


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques