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Natural subject

Postby ozimax on Sat May 07, 2011 8:30 pm

I haven't had much time to browse or post to the site of late. Either I have been ridiculously busy or I've had no internet et al.

I was visiting some dear friends a few weeks ago. They are going to live in Mauritius soon as missionaries; the dad was born there. Seeing some magnificent diffused light streaming through the lounge room, I lined the family up for some photos.

This is a cropped image of the second youngest daughter, with minimal PP involved. She just knew how to pose for a photo. (Some people have it, others don't!)

Edit: For anyone interested, exif data is ISO 500, 50mm prime lens, 1/125 @ F/2.5

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Re: Natural subject

Postby surenj on Sat May 07, 2011 8:36 pm

Absolute cracker Ozi ! /don't tell me that hairlight is also natural?? :roll:
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Re: Natural subject

Postby ozimax on Sat May 07, 2011 8:38 pm

surenj wrote:Absolute cracker Ozi ! /don't tell me that hairlight is also natural?? :roll:


Suren, it is all God's light and nothing else. When I saw the light coming in, I ran for the camera and started ordering my friends around for some shots.
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Re: Natural subject

Postby surenj on Sat May 07, 2011 8:50 pm

Unbelievable Ozi! Couldn't have timed the light better. It's not often that you get a natural subject as well.
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Re: Natural subject

Postby Remorhaz on Sat May 07, 2011 9:48 pm

Beautiful portrait - kids are so great to photograph
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Re: Natural subject

Postby gstark on Sun May 08, 2011 12:21 am

Remorhaz wrote:kids are so great to photograph


I generally like to let them marinate for about an hour, then pop them onto the bbq. :)

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Beautifully captured. Lovely light and subject.
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Re: Natural subject

Postby aim54x on Sun May 08, 2011 12:52 am

great shot there Ozi!
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Re: Natural subject

Postby ozimax on Sun May 08, 2011 7:51 am

gstark wrote:
Remorhaz wrote:kids are so great to photograph


I generally like to let them marinate for about an hour, then pop them onto the bbq. :)


"Samuel Clemens once said that all kids should be placed in a large wooden box, with a hole bored into the same for air. At the age of 13, one should simply put a stopper in the hole." :biglaugh: :biglaugh:
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Re: Natural subject

Postby Matt. K on Sun May 08, 2011 10:29 pm

I love the simplicity of the image. The subject has space to define herself. A small sheet of white cardboard with a hole cut out for the lens....just to bounce a little light into the eyes may have been beneficial.
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Re: Natural subject

Postby sirhc55 on Mon May 09, 2011 12:12 am

Beautiful my friend but remember that if God created the light it was human kind that created the camera :wink:

But I suppose he did make you :D
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Re: Natural subject

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon May 09, 2011 7:22 am

Can't really add more to what has already been said, but if Gary likes a photo of a kid, it must be a good photo. Which this is. Well done.
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Re: Natural subject

Postby ozimax on Mon May 09, 2011 9:09 am

Reschsmooth wrote: but if Gary likes a photo of a kid, it must be a good photo...

:biglaugh: :biglaugh:
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Re: Natural subject

Postby gstark on Mon May 09, 2011 10:37 am

ozimax wrote:
Reschsmooth wrote: but if Gary likes a photo of a kid, it must be a good photo...

:biglaugh: :biglaugh:

:rotfl2:
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Re: Natural subject

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon May 09, 2011 11:02 am

Reschsmooth wrote:but if Gary likes a photo of a kid, it must be a good photo.


or a nice goat. :D
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Re: Natural subject

Postby ozimax on Mon May 09, 2011 11:13 am

Reschsmooth wrote:
Reschsmooth wrote:but if Gary likes a photo of a kid, it must be a good photo.


or a nice goat. :D


Oh deer Patrick, this thread is deteriorating rapidly...
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Re: Natural subject

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon May 09, 2011 11:18 am

ozimax wrote:Oh deer Patrick, this thread is deteriorating rapidly...


See, I was simply fawning* for attention. :biglaugh: :biglaugh:

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* get it? You referred to a "deer" in your comment, following my reference to a young goat, so I used the term "fawning", derived from "fawn" which also means young deer. It's comedic brilliance.
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Re: Natural subject

Postby Mr Darcy on Mon May 09, 2011 2:45 pm

Reschsmooth wrote:
ozimax wrote:Oh deer Patrick, this thread is deteriorating rapidly...


See, I was simply fawning* for attention. :biglaugh: :biglaugh:

[the cold & flu medication is working wonders today]







* get it? You referred to a "deer" in your comment, following my reference to a young goat, so I used the term "fawning", derived from "fawn" which also means young deer. It's comedic brilliance.


At least it was until you explained it to death
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Re: Natural subject

Postby biggerry on Mon May 09, 2011 2:48 pm

surenj wrote:Absolute cracker Ozi !


:agree:

that pretty well sums it up :up:
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Re: Natural subject

Postby ozimax on Mon May 09, 2011 3:25 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:
Reschsmooth wrote:
ozimax wrote:Oh deer Patrick, this thread is deteriorating rapidly...


See, I was simply fawning* for attention. :biglaugh: :biglaugh:

[the cold & flu medication is working wonders today]
* get it? You referred to a "deer" in your comment, following my reference to a young goat, so I used the term "fawning", derived from "fawn" which also means young deer. It's comedic brilliance.


At least it was until you explained it to death


The explanation was funnier than the original!
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