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Sanur Sunrise

Postby Loachlover on Sat May 21, 2011 9:22 am

Hi All, A couple of shots from a recent Bali trip.

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Cheers Loachlover. Any CC welcome.
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Re: Sanur Sunrise

Postby marcotrov on Sat May 21, 2011 6:30 pm

Hi loachlover :) Great image that first one-love it! Really evokes a sense of place and tranquility.
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Re: Sanur Sunrise

Postby surenj on Sun May 22, 2011 12:04 am

Nice mood in the first. I would clone that flare though.

What's going on in the others? :? Is that a scarecrow that has been hung?? :shock:
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Re: Sanur Sunrise

Postby marcotrov on Sun May 22, 2011 7:50 am

Yeah, I agree with Suren on the flare. I missed it first time round. I would also consider cropping a little of that negative space at the bottom so that the slope of the sand meets in the bottom left hand corner of frame. Would probably enhance it as a leading line to the subjects.....if that makes sense?
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