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SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:08 pm

I entered the Sydney Morning Herald 1440 Photo Challenge which was held on Saturday. This is the first year that the challenge has been held for the public to enter.

The basic premise is that you're a photojournalist for the day and are given three briefs to photograph in the Sydney CBD on that day (1440 minutes in a day).

The three Briefs for this year were:

- Public Transport
- Red
- City Living

I joined Craig (Alpha_7) for the day and we wandered the streets looking for images which fit the bill...

So I was hoping some members here could assist me in choosing which one image in each of the three briefs (i.e. you get to submit one image for each of the three briefs - so three in total) from my shortlist to submit :)

Sorry mods in advance for the number of images - if you'll indulge me I'll remove the ones not selected afterwards?

Public Transport
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(in theory could be Red as well)
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Red
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City Living
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Sylvia on Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:34 pm

Well first of all, well done mate, some great captures here.
For me, to fit the criteria I'm going for #5
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Mr Darcy on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:01 pm

For me, photojournalism tells a story. So based on that premise, and the themes:
#1 In. Tells a story, and fits all three themes
#2 Great photo, and fits one theme, but I don't see a story. Out
#3 Potential story here and one theme, possibly two met. In, but not as strong as #1
#4 Fits all three themes, but I don't see the story
#5 Interesting photo and two themes, but a story?
#6 There is a story here, but red is marginal. City living is OK
#7 City living. Could match in with the current story on leasing scams.
#8 Pretty photo, but no story here and I can't see the link to any of the themes

So all in all, I would go with #1, #3, #7 in that order
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby biggerry on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:25 pm

- Public Transport
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- Red
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- City Living
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:50 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:For me, photojournalism tells a story. So based on that premise, and the themes:
...
So all in all, I would go with #1, #3, #7 in that order


Thanks Greg :) - note that the aim is to submit a different image for each theme - so three images in total - one for each brief

biggerry wrote:- Public Transport #1
- Red #4
- City Living #8


Thanks Gerry :)

Looks like #1 was a hit for public transport (it's the one I wanted to submit).

I was struggling with the third brief and didn't think I had anything strong which met it (and was planning to go with the last image which I thought looked nice and might be twisted to meet the brief by creative naming of the image file (e.g. "sparkling_city_nightlife" or something?)
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Matt. K on Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:31 pm

Public transport.
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby biggerry on Tue Jul 19, 2011 9:00 pm

whoops, i meant #7 for the city living one - man i can't count...
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Murray Foote on Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:10 am

I think #1 for public transport, an unusual perspective. #3's not bad but less imaginative.

I think #5 for red, again a bit out of the ordinary. #4's not bad but more static.

I don't think you've nailed it for city living. Lots of city, not so much living.
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Postby gstark on Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:12 am

Number five for me, and probably under the category of "red".

It's clearly not relevant to any form of public (or any other) transport in Sydney, as it appears to be moving. :)

I agree with Murray in that I don't think you're showing anything of merit in terms of city living.
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Postby surenj on Wed Jul 20, 2011 11:15 am

#5 for red! :cheers:
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:25 pm

gstark wrote:Number five for me, and probably under the category of "red".
It's clearly not relevant to any form of public (or any other) transport in Sydney, as it appears to be moving. :)


Ahhh - then you might like this one as well...

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I agree with Murray in that I don't think you're showing anything of merit in terms of city living.


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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Mr Darcy on Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:54 pm

Remorhaz wrote:
I agree with Murray in that I don't think you're showing anything of merit in terms of city living.


.... yeah I know

You didn't happen to get a shot of one of the street people did you?
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby gstark on Wed Jul 20, 2011 1:11 pm

Rodney ...

Remorhaz wrote:Ahhh - then you might like this one as well...


yes, but ...


I agree with Murray in that I don't think you're showing anything of merit in terms of city living.


.... yeah I know :(


perhaps in a very tight crop, on just small part of the signage on the bus on the foreground. :)
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Postby Remorhaz on Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:07 pm

gstark wrote:perhaps in a very tight crop, on just small part of the signage on the bus on the foreground. :)


... a different image...

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Postby gstark on Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:15 pm

I was thinking more of

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Postby Remorhaz on Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:16 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:You didn't happen to get a shot of one of the street people did you?


Not anything great but...

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NB: The brief asked us not to include photos of people which were identifiable.
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:09 pm

Hey Rodney - great set of images.

For me out of the ones you have offered.

#3 Taxi Line Up - Public Transport

#5 and #4 in close second for Red - how did the Westpac sign / post box go ??

# 7 for City Living I like the UWA showing how ontop of each other everyone is. BTW - I've been looking in the galleries of the submissions and not everyone follow the suggestion of not excluding recognisable people.
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Jul 21, 2011 8:22 am

Alpha_7 wrote:#5 and #4 in close second for Red - how did the Westpac sign / post box go ??


Thanks - it was OK but not my fave...

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BTW - I've been looking in the galleries of the submissions and not everyone follow the suggestion of not excluding recognisable people.


Thanks I should take a look :)
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Mr Darcy on Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:49 am

Remorhaz wrote:NB: The brief asked us not to include photos of people which were identifiable.

Damn. That would make it hard.
But you could argue the fact that he is turned away makes him anonymous. Most of the TV News shows people clear when they turnaway & only fuzz them when they are facing the camera.
So I would go with
#1 - Public transport (or Red in which case, #3 for PT)
#4 Red or #5, but I prefer 4
Your street person for City Living, but failing that, #7 but it is much weaker.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Jul 24, 2011 6:50 pm

So Rodney - which photos did you end up entering ?
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Postby Remorhaz on Mon Jul 25, 2011 7:57 am

I went with my initial gut feel for the first two and used 1 and 4 but ended up using 7 instead of 8 (I personally liked #8 except I didn't really think it fitted the brief :().
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 08, 2011 6:23 pm

Congrats Rodney, they just released the Judges finalist and your Red submission is there, well done mate!

http://www.fotoriesel.com.au/1440-challenge
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Postby Remorhaz on Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:22 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Congrats Rodney, they just released the Judges finalist and your Red submission is there, well done mate


Thanks for the heads up Craig :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:11 pm

Hey Rodney, Congratulations mate you won the Red Section!!! :cheers:

Well done mate!


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Postby Remorhaz on Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:47 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Hey Rodney, Congratulations mate you won the Red Section!!! :cheers:
http://www.fotoriesel.com.au/1440-challenge 2:08 PM


Thanks Chris - they just emailed me (they told me there were 700 entries) - very surprised :)
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Postby dviv on Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:53 pm

Congrats Rod! :bowdown:
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Postby gstark on Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:20 pm

That's really great.

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Postby biggerry on Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:52 pm

Woot - Well Done
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Postby Mr Darcy on Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:34 pm

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Postby Sylvia on Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:41 pm

Congrats Rod, bloody well done.!
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Postby aim54x on Thu Aug 11, 2011 10:13 pm

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Postby surenj on Sat Aug 13, 2011 6:43 pm

Congrats!

Very well deserved! :cheers:
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Postby Remorhaz on Sat Aug 13, 2011 8:31 pm

Thanks everyone (I don't know about the well deserved but I'm pleased none the less :) - lucky I didn't win a Canon camera tho :twisted: )...
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Re: SMH 1440 Photo Challenge - Please help me choose...

Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:41 pm

Rodney makes the website again - Nice work Congrats mate are you going on this weekend on the Foto Rally ? :)

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Postby Remorhaz on Wed Sep 21, 2011 5:23 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Rodney makes the website again - Nice work Congrats mate are you going on this weekend on the Foto Rally ? :)


Thanks :) - I don't think I'll be able to make it (the family is going on a holiday during the school holidays so we'll probably be packing :))
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Postby zafra52 on Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:36 pm

5,4 & 2 for me.
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