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Spires

Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Aug 23, 2011 4:34 pm

There seems to be a fair bit of B&W work around at the present, so here's a recent one of mine.

The photograph is of the front of St John's Cathedral here in Brisbane, and the conversion is via SilverEfex Pro 2.

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Re: Spires

Postby zafra52 on Tue Aug 23, 2011 9:30 pm

I like it. The black sky makes me think
it a model on a black background.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Aug 23, 2011 10:29 pm

It was actually a beautiful Queensland blue sky that has been darkened to black in the conversion.
I felt that the Gothic architecture suited this treatment.

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Re: Spires

Postby PiroStitch on Tue Aug 23, 2011 11:45 pm

The details at the top of the spires have been lost with the darkened sky. On closer inspection I can see that there are crucifixes at the top but it's not really obvious unless you look closely. Can you bring out the details a bit more?
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Re: Spires

Postby biggerry on Thu Aug 25, 2011 9:11 pm

Interesting image, there is a strange mix of angles and the tight crop gives a different viewpoint. I think teh processing works well and compliments the image, The composition is not somethign I would typically run with. What are you trying to convey with teh image?
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Re: Spires

Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:15 pm

biggerry wrote:Interesting image, there is a strange mix of angles and the tight crop gives a different viewpoint. I think teh processing works well and compliments the image, The composition is not somethign I would typically run with. What are you trying to convey with teh image?


Well, it's all about geometry - the repeating upward-pointing spires and triangles, together with the texture of the sandstone construction material. The crosses on the top of the larger triangles are incidental, which is why I haven't worried too much about them, although posting it here seems to have cut down some of that detail.

I felt that darkening the sky to black gave the whole image a feel that complements the Gothic architecture of the cathedral.

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Re: Spires

Postby surenj on Fri Aug 26, 2011 12:39 pm

Love it! :cheers: When I clicked through to the bigger image, the sharpness and detail is great. Nice choice of dark sky here and the BW treatment.

The only improvement I can think of is to have made it absolutely symmetrical by taking a step to the left.
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