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Western Plains Zoo

Postby biggerry on Fri Aug 26, 2011 8:44 am

I recently (on a side trip for a wedding) visited Dubbos Western Plains Zoo, as a interesting fact, if you have a Taronga Zoo friends pass, this gets you into the Dubbo Western Plains Zoo.

This place is big, I went there when I was a wee tacker and the only thing I remember is that it was fing hot and there was stinging nettle, don't remember seeing any animals.. :?

I guess as far as zoo's go this place seems pretty good, definitely more space for the inmates but from a photography point of view its a pure lucky dip.

Keen to get some feedback on a few images I took there.

'you look tasty, if only that moat was not in my way' - man this animal looked sour :)

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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby Remorhaz on Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:12 am

Nice - I've got a #2 and an almost identical #3 (composition at least - I was using the 18-200 at the time) from western plains zoo.

I think with #4 a more pano crop would suit - removing most or all of that dark stripe at the bottom and some of the extra bamboo at the top. I kinda felt I lost the animal when I first looked - all that bright and busy at the top.

No Zebra shots? :)
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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby biggerry on Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:03 pm

Remorhaz wrote:
No Zebra shots? :)



zzZZZz.. zebras are soo yesterday :wink:

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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby Reschsmooth on Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:59 pm

Nice, however, I feel the second one is too highly cropped and it almost looks like a floating torso and head. I would include more of its legs.
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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby DanielA on Fri Aug 26, 2011 10:42 pm

I spent a couple of days there too. Did you get any shots of the new meerkat pups?

Nice lion shot. The cut off paw concerns me, but you could go for a tighter crop.

Your wrinkly (african?) elephant shot works pretty well.

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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby aim54x on Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:13 am

Your making me yearn to visit the zoo again....Dubbo may not be a possibility due to time constraints so I guess I will have to settle for Taronga
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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby biggerry on Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:39 am

Reschsmooth wrote:Nice, however, I feel the second one is too highly cropped and it almost looks like a floating torso and head. I would include more of its legs.


I do hear what you are saying, the image is not cropped it is as framed in camera. I have a few others where the whole animal is in shot, however I felt this one was stronger due to the better eye contact, in teh full length shots the head gets lost and the eyes are almost non existent.


DanielA wrote:I spent a couple of days there too. Did you get any shots of the new meerkat pups?


I did see them (or their home at least), but did not pay much attention to be honest :|

DanielA wrote:Nice lion shot. The cut off paw concerns me, but you could go for a tighter crop.


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aim54x wrote:Your making me yearn to visit the zoo again....Dubbo may not be a possibility due to time constraints so I guess I will have to settle for Taronga


I have not been to Taronga in years, I am keen for another visit, but its gotta be a weekday, there is not enough dosh in the world to pay me to battle the crowds and kids on the weekend.
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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby DanielA on Sat Aug 27, 2011 10:52 pm

biggerry wrote:I did see them (or their home at least), but did not pay much attention to be honest :|

I took way too many shots of them. :)

This lioness shot is nice, since she is looking that direction.

biggerry wrote:I have not been to Taronga in years, I am keen for another visit, but its gotta be a weekday, there is not enough dosh in the world to pay me to battle the crowds and kids on the weekend.

The school groups were pretty obnoxious during the week...

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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby lightning on Sun Aug 28, 2011 7:15 am

The expression on the first lion suggests a suppository has just been put in place :shock:
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Re: Western Plains Zoo

Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 28, 2011 11:14 pm

The first one for me and second
the one with the bar code. :D
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