A Sunday Drive

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A Sunday Drive

Postby Wink on Sun Aug 28, 2011 9:21 pm

I know HDR is an acquired taste and I struggle to make it work most of the time, but I really like the below shot...

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You guys see things I don't so I'd greatly appreciate some C&C. :cheers:
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby aim54x on Sun Aug 28, 2011 9:58 pm

This looks amazing, if you didnt say it was a HDR I doubt many would be able to pick it!

I love how it has a very natural feel, and the image itself is great with the captured motion
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:44 am

I think it is a great image - for the most part it certainly doesn't look HDR'd at all (except perhaps for some of that haloing in the sky around the trees/leaves). But the feel of speed is good and the perspective is great.
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby zafra52 on Mon Aug 29, 2011 7:16 pm

It is a nice shot, but I don't dare
asking how did you do it...for
I'm afraid of the answer.
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby Wink on Mon Aug 29, 2011 8:19 pm

Thanks guys.

Zaf, it wasn't quite as bad as you're probably imagining. :wink:
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby surenj on Mon Aug 29, 2011 8:31 pm

Very creative. You can probably shave off a little bit of sky and get the viewer more concentrated on the car itself. Get rid of those halos though.

Wink wrote:Zaf, it wasn't quite as bad as you're probably imagining.

Adam, did you use a suction bracket? or a monopod perhaps... :mrgreen:
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby biggerry on Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:12 pm

Nice stuff Adam, the alternative perspective works very well.

As for the processing, it is subtle and appropriate until you get to the sky. The uneven blotches of blue turn me off straight away, now, don't read that as a complete show stopper however its just one thing that I find screams HDR and unatural HDR at that. I would look at reprocessing to take that into account, I assume your using photomatix, if that is the case ramping up the light smoothing will give you much better smoothing (der :) ) in the blue sky and the clouds.

other than that, i got nothign else. Top effort on the composition and hanging your head outta the window (although I would have been really impressed if it was the other side of teh car :roll: )
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby zafra52 on Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:30 pm

I still think I would rather bathe in ignorance.
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby Wink on Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:37 pm

It's just one of the presets in Nik HDR Pro. I really should experiment with the sliders and see what does what.
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby surenj on Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:42 pm

Wink wrote:I know HDR is an acquired taste and I struggle to make it work most of the time

I hope you realise that this shot works because of it's fantastic composition and timing etc making it so dynamic. Of course the cartoony colors do help but only to complement it's goodness. :wink:

Here is the crop I suggested...
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby biggerry on Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:50 pm

Wink wrote:It's just one of the presets in Nik HDR Pro. I really should experiment with the sliders and see what does what.


heres a quick crack, 2.75mins..exactly dodgy fix and I reckon with some real love it could be beautiful..(like jennifer aniston)

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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby surenj on Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:57 pm

What adjustments did you do Gerry? I can't see a difference?
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby biggerry on Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:02 pm

surenj wrote:What adjustments did you do Gerry? I can't see a difference?


check the sky, the way the blue transistions to teh white clouds.
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby surenj on Tue Aug 30, 2011 12:04 pm

biggerry wrote: blue transistions to teh white clouds.

Got it. I was distracted more by the halos around the trees which seem to be more difficult to remove. I guess you need to zoom in a spend time to get those right.
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Re: A Sunday Drive

Postby ozimax on Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:14 pm

Great image Winks, well done. The trees and skyline lead well to the car. Excellent.
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