Full on at the Pizzeria

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Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby Bob G on Mon Oct 10, 2011 8:25 pm

Interested in comments on these:

Preparing the base

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Ready for the wood fired oven

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Serving the pizzas

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and a drop of house red

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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby Big V on Tue Oct 11, 2011 5:52 pm

Bob, I would like to see these as a gritty BW series to see if it suits the mood more.
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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby Bob G on Tue Oct 11, 2011 9:24 pm

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Big V wrote:Bob, I would like to see these as a gritty BW series to see if it suits the mood more.


Seemed like a good suggestion given the mixed lighting etc.

Here they are again as suggested.

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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby sirhc55 on Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:20 pm

It always amazes me that one can take a perfectly good colour photo and turn into a black and white masterpiece.

These conversions have a touch of early Fellini and suit admirably the pizza parlour genre.
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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby Steffen on Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:34 pm

sirhc55 wrote:It always amazes me that one can take a perfectly good colour photo and turn into a black and white masterpiece.


Interesting, isn't it? In my uninformed opinion colour can be as much a distraction as superfluous image content or busy backgrounds, and take away from the impact of a photograph. Unless colour adds information or mood it is probably best removed, thereby distilling the image to what really matters. Another option would be creatively manipulating the colour to make it say something the natural coloration doesn't. I've done that to the first image in this series with interesting result, but I'm not going to share it :P

Of this series I like the first one best. Despite its tight confines it has great depth and sets the pizza baker on the right perfectly in scene.

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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby Bob G on Thu Oct 13, 2011 7:07 pm

Thanks guys and thanks to Big V for spotting the way forward with the images.
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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby Big V on Fri Oct 14, 2011 11:20 am

Bob, spot on - these look fantstic and make for a stronger set.
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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby zafra52 on Fri Oct 14, 2011 6:59 pm

I like them too.
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Re: Full on at the Pizzeria

Postby PiroStitch on Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:29 am

Can't say I'm a huge fan of the b&w conversions. If the WB was more spot on with the colour images, it would be a lot better. The reason I say this is that you've isolated the subjects already with your composition so there isn't a lot of background "noise" to distract the viewer from the main subject.

Usually I'm a huge advocate for b&w images as that's what I predominantly shoot nowadays, however these images don't require b&w for the aforementioned reasons.
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