Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

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Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Nov 01, 2011 3:36 pm

I recently travelled to Canberra for three days with 70+ children on a school camp with my daughter.

I of course took many photos whilst I we were there and it was a great opportunity to test out my newly acquired Nikon 70-200/2.8 (just over 400 images (about 50% of the total) with this lens). This is one of my early efforts which I unfortunately shot wide open at f/2.8 and since I didn't nail the focus properly I didn't get enough depth of field and as such fail :(

Over the course of a couple days I did take a number of better portraits with the lens, however as murphy's law would have it they are all of other children...

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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby biggerry on Wed Nov 02, 2011 9:18 pm

Remorhaz wrote: This is one of my early efforts which I unfortunately shot wide open at f/2.8 and since I didn't nail the focus properly I didn't get enough depth of field and as such fail


it still looks more than acceptable, the focus plane appears to be just behind the eyes, ie the hairline is really sharp. The bokeh is pretty sweet, as one would expect, you now have me wanting this darn lens..

at the end of teh day, its a good portrait and the flaws (focus and slight chopped off head) are diminished significantly due to the framing, and captured expression. If its one thing I have learnt, those two factors the latter moreso, override just about any technical flaw when it comes to kid portraits...
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby norwest on Wed Nov 02, 2011 9:23 pm

The brokeh is silk.
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby surenj on Thu Nov 03, 2011 1:26 pm

You throw away your backgrounds and stands, as this lens seems to change any background into something bokelicious.
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby Sylvia on Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:35 pm

Woah.. nice boke!
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:41 pm

biggerry wrote:it still looks more than acceptable, the focus plane appears to be just behind the eyes, ie the hairline is really sharp. The bokeh is pretty sweet, as one would expect, you now have me wanting this darn lens..

norwest wrote:The brokeh is silk.

surenj wrote:You throw away your backgrounds and stands, as this lens seems to change any background into something bokelicious.

Sylvia wrote:Woah.. nice boke!


Yes mucho happy with the bokeh - smooth and sweet. In this case the background was mostly just grass. For most of the portraits I took I was shooting at f/4 for a little more DoF (to cope with subject and camera operator movement) and mostly with trees, gardens and flower beds and such in the background but it still renders them as a very pleasant monet haze (not a single flat colour like this but still very nice and smooth).
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby PiroStitch on Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:53 am

I don't know what you're unhappy about because that image is tops! For portraits I tend to aim for at least the nose, eyes and mouth to be sharp, however I've bent that rule whenever I saw fit. What you have there is top notch and I highly doubt the parent of that girl will be unhappy with what you've captured.
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby ozimax on Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:15 pm

Very nice image Rodney, and yes, the 70-200 (Canon or Nikon) is a classic lens with a great focal length. There's not much you can't photograph with it. You've done very well.

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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby Remorhaz on Sat Nov 05, 2011 12:33 pm

PiroStitch wrote:I don't know what you're unhappy about because that image is tops! For portraits I tend to aim for at least the nose, eyes and mouth to be sharp, however I've bent that rule whenever I saw fit. What you have there is top notch and I highly doubt the parent of that girl will be unhappy with what you've captured.


The aim was to get the eyes super sharp but I missed it by a hair I expect. I do very much like the shot - the unhappiness is knowing I could have got it just that bit better by nailing the eyes :) and yes the parent (me) is happy :)

ozimax wrote:Very nice image Rodney, and yes, the 70-200 (Canon or Nikon) is a classic lens with a great focal length. There's not much you can't photograph with it. You've done very well.


Yep - very happy with the lens so far - as with many things - should have done it a long time ago :)

I've yet to try it with the TC (1.4) that I bought a little while back - perhaps I'll have to go out with Gerry birding or something sometime :) - that beach location looked pretty sweet as well :)
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby PiroStitch on Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:13 pm

Remorhaz wrote:The aim was to get the eyes super sharp but I missed it by a hair I expect. I do very much like the shot - the unhappiness is knowing I could have got it just that bit better by nailing the eyes :) and yes the parent (me) is happy :)


Stop pixel peeping :nono: :rotfl2:
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby surenj on Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:44 pm

PiroStitch wrote:Stop pixel peeping

:agree: Although you'd want to correct that white balance though. :wink:
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Re: Portrait with the 70-200/2.8...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Nov 08, 2011 8:05 pm

surenj wrote:Although you'd want to correct that white balance though. :wink:


Yeah I know - lots and lots of lush bright greenery made for lots of green reflected light which makes for mucho problemo.

I've had another go at this portrait adjusting both temp and tint by eye.
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