Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

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Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby surenj on Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:54 pm

Thanks Gerry and Rodney for company (and light! as I forgot mine and had a defective ebay EL wire handy!). Dusk seems to be a good time to visit as there are less visitors anyway. Sunrise would be interesting as well. :wink:

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Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby chrisk on Sun Nov 13, 2011 3:11 pm

Wow. Just wow. You guys rock. The tap one is so cleverly done !
Really like the tones of #2 aswell
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby aim54x on Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:22 pm

These look amazing! Great work
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:41 pm

These are awesome and the lighting works.
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby Mr Darcy on Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:41 pm

Well I sure as hell ain't gonna post my crappy pics now!
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby rflower on Sun Nov 13, 2011 6:12 pm

These are good shots.

#1 - I like the colours / darkness of the sky and clouds. I would have liked to have seen the sculpture lit up more / longer (similar to biggerry's). Ultimately a blend of the 2 ... Your sky with Gerry's sculpture :mrgreen: I think that it needs more light to help it "pop" more.

#2 for me, this is the weakest of the set. The subject does not do do much for me.

#3 Wow! IMO is the best. The light painting is cool, and really finishes the sculpture. Were the taps lit blue? or were they light painted too?

Well done.

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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby biggerry on Sun Nov 13, 2011 8:50 pm

Looking good suren, I like the compo on the first, however I would like to see....nah scrap that idea actually, I think this is pretty sweet and good use of all the surrounding elements at hand.

Good work on that second one too, simplicity is often the key and you have nailed it here, simple shadowy light works well.

The 3rd one is much better than mine, I think you had teh premo possie there. This is one example of that light painting really adding to teh scenery. I would probably rework the flow at the tap end just to clean up the dodgy start bit..or kick the pleb doing it... :)

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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby Jenno on Sun Nov 13, 2011 9:19 pm

All good but #3...superb :up:
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby NeoTiger on Mon Nov 14, 2011 12:22 am

Wow, #3 is amazing. Did you have to try several times to get it just right?
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Nov 14, 2011 7:52 am

Nice work Suren - I like your compo of #1 and your sky is more like what I was thinking of - darker and moodier. For me the bottom half looks a little cool though (it probably was with our led lighting)

I like what you've done with #2 - I don't remember us doing one that well lit - you must have extracted every last morsel of juice out of the raw - and I can't really see any signs of degradation so very nicely done.

#3 - nice colour shifting - I thought you were going to make the water blue and not everything else :)

NeoTiger wrote:Wow, #3 is amazing. Did you have to try several times to get it just right?


Red was attempt #2 (we only did 3 before going for a moon pic :)) - Gerry was almost tall enough to reach the tube up there to the spout
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby norwest on Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:46 am

Love #1. Well done.
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby zafra52 on Mon Nov 14, 2011 12:23 pm

I love them! Specially the last two.
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby surenj on Tue Nov 15, 2011 12:09 am

Many thanks for your comments good bad or ugly.

Remorhaz wrote:Red was attempt #2 (we only did 3 before going for a moon pic ) - Gerry was almost tall enough to reach the tube up there to the spout

Neotiger, Gerry is a certain expert at painting. It's actually really hard to get those cathodes off his hands. They are his so maybe he has a point. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: I do have one more idea for this tap (by the way is the winner this year). Standby for that image soon....

Remorhaz wrote: I don't remember us doing one that well lit - you must have extracted every last morsel of juice out of the raw - and I can't really see any signs of degradation so very nicely done.

Will have another look. I think I may have done this exposure just prior to the cathode stuff we tried on it.


biggerry wrote: I think you had teh premo possie there. This is one example of that light painting really adding to teh scenery. I would probably rework the flow at the tap end just to clean up the dodgy start bit..or kick the pleb doing it...

It shows how a few feet can make a big difference in the composition....
Thanks for the nice painting here. My attempt didn't quite come off at all. Yeah yeah. I'll clean up the start no issues...

biggerry wrote:thanks for coming out even after the pain of gettign there!

Ditto.

rflower wrote: I think that it needs more light to help it "pop" more

That can be arranged I think. Will have to have another look at the file.

rflower wrote:Were the taps lit blue? or were they light painted too?

No. They are completely unlit. We used a LED light and I pushed the WB to blue as I preferred a surreal theme to show this everyday object. Surreal water meets mundane tap with surreal colors. :roll: Initially my plan was to make the water blue though.


Remorhaz wrote:For me the bottom half looks a little cool though (it probably was with our led lighting)

I am keen on a cooler look for this image. Makes it more alien I reckon. I was hoping to keep it uniform though. Will have another look.
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Nov 15, 2011 9:56 am

Being up in Brisbane, I haven't had the opportunity to see these works of art for myself, but I have enjoyed all the photographs presented by forum members.

Here is an incredibly stuffy and elitist view of the sculptures that appears in today's The Australian newspaper.

Does anyone agree with this journalist's perception of the pieces presented at the event?
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby gstark on Tue Nov 15, 2011 10:10 am

the foto fanatic wrote:Does anyone agree with this journalists perception of the pieces presented at the event?


Not I.

I suspect that he's missing a major point behind Sculpture By The Sea, in that it's intent is to be a casual pop art exhibition, by and for the masses, in a very casual setting.

Its popularity clearly indicates how successful it is (sadly too, as this popularity also perhaps corresponds with the populist so-called reality tv crap that we see) but the items on display do, as a general observation, lead people (well, me, anyway) to think about the artwork, its placement and juxtaposition within the environment, as well as the environment in general.
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby surenj on Tue Nov 15, 2011 5:41 pm

the foto fanatic wrote:Does anyone agree with this journalist's perception of the pieces presented at the event?

It's difficult to agree with the journalists viewpoint because of how the iconicity of the figurative-narrative line-space matrix visually and conceptually activates the larger carcass.
Besides, I like those cute Zebras. :mrgreen: :roll:
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby Matt. K on Tue Nov 15, 2011 10:29 pm

Nice work Suren! Your talent is evident.
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Re: Painting the Sculptures by the Sea 2011

Postby colin_12 on Wed Nov 16, 2011 10:10 pm

Very nicely done
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