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Re: 2 recent portraitsMatt
I just love the light in that one of Philo. Peter
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Re: 2 recent portraitsOh wow.
The first image is what I suppose the way a Nobel Prize laureate would like to be portrayed. The portrait of Philo absolutely nails it. The setup, the lighting, the tones, her pose – just sublime. You're the man. Cheers Steffen. lust for comfort suffocates the soul
Re: 2 recent portraitsLove the 2nd one for the lighting and composition.
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2 recent portraitsNot a fan I the first. Looks like hes in the process of walking. The 2nd is absolutely superb in every way.
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Re: 2 recent portraitsI'm afraid me too - like the second very much but not the first
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Re: 2 recent portraitsThanks guys! I got it...number 2....not number 1. Curiously, I was trying something different in number 1 and it appeals to me as a high tech, modern environmenal kind of portrait. I tried to make the space an element of the image. Back to the drawing board perhaps.
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2 recent portraitsI think it's just the pose that puts me off Matt. Not necessarily the other elements. Perhaps if he was in a different position it wouldn't look so awkward.
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Re: 2 recent portraitsI think in the first it is because I get a sense that everything seems to be falling slightly that I cant enagage enough with the subject, whilst the second is an absolute cracker. Very clever use of a background scene to enhance the portrait.
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Re: 2 recent portraits#2 A pearler of a shot, is this taken with the X10?
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Re: 2 recent portraitsI love the second however would prefer a more gentle transition from the darkness to the light on Philo.
I think the first works brilliantly apart from the slight lean to the right. The lighting works really well and the subject, composition and expression suits the image. Regards, Patrick
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Ah ha - proof the X10 takes better shots Peter
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Re: 2 recent portraitsMatt,
I will chime in with #2. IMO perfect lighting on the subject sets it apart. fozzie
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Re: 2 recent portraitsCamera aside, the second image appeals to me much more. The composition is stronger and the lighting more pleasing. The first image also feels a bit cold....WB issue?
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Re: 2 recent portraitsBoth are good, but the second is to
put it simply ... splendid.
Re: 2 recent portraitsI like #2 because it is hard to go past an actual pic of Philo
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