2 recent portraits

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2 recent portraits

Postby Matt. K on Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:48 pm

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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby stubbsy on Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:54 pm

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I just love the light in that one of Philo.
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby Steffen on Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:05 pm

Oh wow.

The first image is what I suppose the way a Nobel Prize laureate would like to be portrayed. The portrait of Philo absolutely nails it. The setup, the lighting, the tones, her pose – just sublime.

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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby PiroStitch on Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:36 am

Love the 2nd one for the lighting and composition.
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2 recent portraits

Postby chrisk on Tue Dec 27, 2011 7:30 am

Not a fan I the first. Looks like hes in the process of walking. The 2nd is absolutely superb in every way.
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Dec 27, 2011 5:36 pm

I'm afraid me too - like the second very much but not the first
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby Matt. K on Wed Dec 28, 2011 7:58 pm

Thanks guys! I got it...number 2....not number 1. :D Curiously, I was trying something different in number 1 and it appeals to me as a high tech, modern environmenal kind of portrait. I tried to make the space an element of the image. Back to the drawing board perhaps.
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2 recent portraits

Postby chrisk on Wed Dec 28, 2011 9:54 pm

I think it's just the pose that puts me off Matt. Not necessarily the other elements. Perhaps if he was in a different position it wouldn't look so awkward.
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby Big V on Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:09 pm

I think in the first it is because I get a sense that everything seems to be falling slightly that I cant enagage enough with the subject, whilst the second is an absolute cracker. Very clever use of a background scene to enhance the portrait.
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby Geoff M on Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:25 pm

#2 :up: A pearler of a shot, is this taken with the X10?
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby Reschsmooth on Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:48 pm

I love the second however would prefer a more gentle transition from the darkness to the light on Philo.

I think the first works brilliantly apart from the slight lean to the right. The lighting works really well and the subject, composition and expression suits the image.
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby Matt. K on Fri Dec 30, 2011 9:29 pm

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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby stubbsy on Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:18 pm

Matt. K wrote:Geof M
First pic was Nikon D300
Second pic was Fuji X10

Ah ha - proof the X10 takes better shots :biglaugh:
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby fozzie on Sat Dec 31, 2011 9:43 am

Matt,

I will chime in with #2. IMO perfect lighting on the subject sets it apart.
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby aim54x on Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:58 pm

Camera aside, the second image appeals to me much more. The composition is stronger and the lighting more pleasing. The first image also feels a bit cold....WB issue?
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jan 01, 2012 9:19 pm

Both are good, but the second is to
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Re: 2 recent portraits

Postby colin_12 on Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:05 pm

I like #2 because it is hard to go past an actual pic of Philo :cheers:
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