Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

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Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:09 pm

It was a very wet, rainy and extremely cloudy morning when I awoke before 4AM for the early trip over to Watsons Bay/Camp Cove on the South Head of Sydney Harbour for another seascape outing.

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I'd not been to this location before so was thankful for some useful directions provided me on the way (thanks Gerry :))

I must say it wasn't looking good - in fact it looked very grim - it was pouring rain in the city when I was driving through on the way and the sky was just one mass of heavy clouds - I really wasn't expecting much this day other than dark grey.

As luck would have it - it wasn't raining when I arrived at South Head and since I had packed a raincoat in my camera backpack and carried an umbrella on my walk around to the lighthouse it didn't rain the whole time we were there and only started to rain again when we were about 100m from the car on the way back out - so that was the good news :)

We parked in the carpark near Camp Cove Kiosk and walked across the beach and along the path following the coastline around to Hornby Lighthouse which is at the tip of South Head.

On the way out to the lighthouse I took this shot during twilight from the Northern end of Camp Cove looking back to the city

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We got a few breaks in the clouds but there wasn't much of a show at sunrise. We stayed up on the top of the cliff rather than braving the rock shelves below (mostly because we only arrived barely in time for sunrise itself) and it was very windy up top. However we did get to look over the very interesting Red and White striped lighthouse and had a great view out to sea to watch the sun peek under the clouds on the horizon before darting back behind the thick dark mass. We got a few bursts of light and a nice almost God ray effect with the sun shining through the rain pouring down on the far horizon.

A couple views out to see just as the sun hit the horizon which I'm happy with

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and then it was time to try and craft some images of the lighthouse whilst the suns early rays were hitting coast, before the sun moved higher and behind the heavy black clouds

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Mods: I'm going to post one of the lighthouse ones in the Nautical thread if you wanted to remove from here since I'm over the limit by one...
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Re: Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

Postby zafra52 on Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:22 pm

Very nice images, especially the first and
last one.
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Re: Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

Postby aim54x on Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:53 pm

For the conditions you certainly made the most of it!
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Re: Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

Postby biggerry on Mon Jan 16, 2012 9:10 pm

Not too shabby given the conditions, my pick would be the first one. :up:
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Re: Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

Postby Willy wombat on Tue Jan 17, 2012 5:56 pm

I like them all - #2 especially
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Re: Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

Postby surenj on Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:46 pm

#1 has superb tones but I wonder whether it could be further improved by a little croppage at the bottom.
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Re: Sunrise (well an attempt at least) at South Head...

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:00 pm

Thanks everyone :)

surenj wrote:#1 has superb tones but I wonder whether it could be further improved by a little croppage at the bottom.


Not sure - I actually have a version of this image I took a few mins later which is framed with much less sky and more at the bottom (horizon sort of near top third) - which is also nice compositionally but as it had gotten lighter by the time I took it I don't think the tones/colours were as nice.
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