A dose of the trots

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A dose of the trots

Postby norwest on Mon Mar 12, 2012 9:03 am

No, not the trots you were thinking, :wink: pacing, in fact.

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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:54 am

#2 is a nice capture - initially I was thinking that it could have done with a little more on both the left and right (and maybe it still could) but now I'm starting to light the tighter crop.
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby biggerry on Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:16 pm

Not your best Norwest and I know you could do better.

#1 whilst the horse is in focus the man is not and to make it worse he is looking just out of frame. My eyes are firstly drawn to teh man due to teh brighter part of teh frame, hence I firstly notice the OOF before i notice the goodness of the horse.

#2 Probably teh best shot, however feels like you missed the composition by a few seconds, too tight imo.

#3 I don't think teh fill lighting works here, it feels a bit unatural and not complimentary - i know that does not make much sense.. but I cannot quite put my finger on it.

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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby sirhc55 on Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:31 pm

Gerry - could you please, please fix your keyboard so that teh becomes the - ta mate :lol:
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A dose of the trots

Postby Wink on Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:43 pm

Been there, done that... Didn't work.

Do a search for it if you really want a laugh :)
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby biggerry on Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:15 pm

Wink wrote:Been there, done that... Didn't work.

Do a search for it if you really want a laugh :)
sirhc55 wrote:Gerry - could you please, please fix your keyboard so that teh becomes the - ta mate :lol:


I did try for a good week to try and nail it everytime...but gave up after that, i even re labelled the keys on the board but that just absolute chaos. but check it... there is one right 'the' in that sentence...woot, i am a recovering 'teh-aholic'

right, now we have that outta our systems lets get back on topic.
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby sirhc55 on Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:41 pm

biggerry wrote:
Wink wrote:Been there, done that... Didn't work.

Do a search for it if you really want a laugh :)
sirhc55 wrote:Gerry - could you please, please fix your keyboard so that teh becomes the - ta mate :lol:


I did try for a good week to try and nail it everytime...but gave up after that, i even re labelled the keys on the board but that just absolute chaos. but check it... there is one right 'the' in that sentence...woot, i am a recovering 'teh-aholic'

right, now we have that outta our systems lets get back on topic.


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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby norwest on Tue Mar 13, 2012 9:47 am

biggerry wrote:Not your best Norwest and I know you could do better.

#1 whilst the horse is in focus the man is not and to make it worse he is looking just out of frame. My eyes are firstly drawn to teh man due to teh brighter part of teh frame, hence I firstly notice the OOF before i notice the goodness of the horse.

#2 Probably teh best shot, however feels like you missed the composition by a few seconds, too tight imo.

#3 I don't think teh fill lighting works here, it feels a bit unatural and not complimentary - i know that does not make much sense.. but I cannot quite put my finger on it.

hth.


Hiya Gerry. Yep, could of been a lot better. Shot @ F5.6 which i thought would give enough depth. The driver was holding horse after the race while a hobble was being untangled from a rear leg. He was talking to someone so i dived in and down for a quick shot.

# 1 & 3 were both shot @ - 1 full stop ex. comp & + 1 full stop flash comp.

The shot below is the frame following the 2nd shot above.

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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby biggerry on Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:32 pm

That last image is much better imo.

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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby surenj on Tue Mar 13, 2012 3:33 pm

Last one is looking good as it's got more space around the subject to let it breath. :cheers:
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby norwest on Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:28 pm

Just as a matter of interest, all the sports shots i post are for a regional newspaper whom publish them, 'usually', in a very small format of around 3x4 in column inches ( can't take too much advertising space :( ) and if the shot isn't tight the subject and any detail gets lost on the poor quality newsprint. So, as a result, I always shoot tight and crop even tighter. The shots i post are simply web reduced copies of the edited shots.
I know, i know, i shouldn't be so lazy and re edit before i post. :oops:

However, i agree wholeheartedly that a reasonably clear air leading out of frame and a 'not so sqeezy" crop, but not a loose crop, not only looks the best, it is the best. BTW, they mustn't have noticed the oof face in the first shot above. Just spoke with them and it's getting a half back page tomorrow with the trophy presentation shot. :oops: Hell, on newsprint both will look 'double oof', more the pity. How to ruin a decent shot? Put it on newsprint. :violin:

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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby biggerry on Wed Mar 14, 2012 1:05 am

I reckon the average layman would probably not notice - sometimes its the content that is important rather than the technical side of sharpness.

For papers/rags, i thought supplying slightly wider shots was desirable so the editor can crop to their desire.
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby norwest on Wed Mar 14, 2012 7:06 pm

biggerry wrote:I reckon the average layman would probably not notice - sometimes its the content that is important rather than the technical side of sharpness.

For papers/rags, i thought supplying slightly wider shots was desirable so the editor can crop to their desire.

Yep, that's normal more often than not, however, as they don't have experienced photographers and photo editors on staff and having previously seen their photo presentation, part of my conditions were and still are doing my own editing. They gave their standard regular sizes in picas and i size accordingly and provide in 400dpi files. If required, ( not too often) they can also reduced or enlarged when doing page layouts and/or minimal cropping. They also like it as it saves them a heap of time.

The shots above were part of of 25 shots sent which included social, (people shots for the social pages) trophy presentations and pacing.

The shot below got a half page with a little cropped off both the top (just below the N on the winning post) and bottom. (to the base of the gig wheel)

The name familiar?

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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby surenj on Wed Mar 14, 2012 11:58 pm

That's an interesting story! It's nice to see that they are actually using nice pictures than ones from grandmas HTC or iphone.

Are you getting payment for your time?
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby norwest on Thu Mar 15, 2012 9:36 am

Yes, Surenj. Been doing contract/freelance work since moving from the coast half a dozen years ago and busy every weekend and some weekdays, depending on the events and occasions at the time. It's very different running around like a blue arsed fly and I'm usually totally pooped out, but it's extremely enjoyable covering anything in social occasions, community events and most sports.

Community 'stuff' is important in country towns so there's quite an emphasis on it.

I'm looking forward to soon shooting some sports for the first time. Polocrosse, Rodeo events and Horse Football. Yes, horse football. Football played on horseback. Passing a beachball sized ball between riders, kinda like polocrosse but using only the hands. Imagine a rider leaning way out of the saddle to reach down and scoop up the ball with one hand while at a full gallop. Not for the feint hearted. Equestrian events are obviously popular in a country region. And that's no bull. :wink:
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby biggerry on Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:43 pm

norwest wrote:The shot below got a half page with a little cropped off both the top (just below the N on the winning post) and bottom. (to the base of the gig wheel)

The name familiar?



lol, never been to the paceway at Narrabri, i guess its dried out now ;)
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Re: A dose of the trots

Postby norwest on Thu Mar 15, 2012 2:00 pm

Yes, a couple of months ago the horses had to wear flippers, the gig wheels were replaced with floats and i was shooting them from a 12 foot tinny with an electric motor so it didn't spook the horses.
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