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Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentWell entertainment it was, getting there was half the fun, how I did not get bitten by a spider I do not know..
It was nearly as bad as teh Malabar session A few different images from teh usual seascape shots. Comments and critique welcome. some other nutter... ho hum, some water and rocks and a concrete thing in teh back ground.. gerry's photography journey
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Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentahh can't forget the green sh$t
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Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentI would love to see #2 with the black rock on the bottom right cloned out.
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Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentWow! Love the tones and composition of #4
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Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentIf it was possible, I would prefer to see greater separation between the rock at bottom right and the ship at the right. That is, take the shot from further left. Obviously I am referring to shot 2.
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Chris, I see where you are coming from, the reason I included the rocks and rusted steel supports was more of a local history perspective than anything else, that was teh old jetty where the coal from the local mines was loaded into ships. I agree the image could be better in a minimalist sense without the rocks.
yes, i wish i had one like that now
ha, i thought that was the worst of the lot (composition was ok- processing sucks) - I only like the fact that the rock wall on the right looks like a face gerry's photography journey
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Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentI like both the subdued, dusk tones and red hue of late afternoon sun on the bridge shots.
Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentActually I'm quite partial to #4 as well.
I don't mind #3 either - nice tones in the sky D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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cheers Norwest, these are sunrise, the sunrise was cloudless but the red hue was incredible, almost like a sunset, once the sun came up over the horizon everything turned that golden colour.
probably lucky I did not delete it then I may even have alook at other similar ones gerry's photography journey
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Glad you went first and are taller than I
Well close but...the ground surface water didnt look like it escaped from the treatment works...and the bush bash had a better ending...same cast though...beats me how we've survived your bear grylls expeditions for so long Geez I really like that 3rd pic...that bloke obviously works out .. nice leading line and sky colour. Those bridge shots are great.. Love the difference in the colour temp of the light between 1 and 5. Dont mind the noxious weed in the foreground of 5 although the flowers you took great pains to include arnt that obvious. Shame the woody bits encroach the frame but not a lot you can do about that Is that a hole in the rock face on the right of #1? Think I would be cloning that out as I find it a bit distracting. The rock itself provides a framing element which I didnt include in my shots but think it works. Cant get excited about the boats...thought you might've scored one crossing the rising sun... you must've used one of Gary's B&W CF cards..Ah well there is always next time when there will be heaps of cloud. I am assuming your red shots didnt work? All up.... a good mornings work thanks for heading up the expedition
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Ok, I see. Do you think you achieved that by including that structure ? Not sure it's distinguishable enough. I see the makings of a superb minimalist shot there is all I'm saying. It immediately caught my eye as very different. Just my opinion mate. EM1 l 7.5 l 12-40 l 14 l 17 l 25 l 45 l 60 l 75 l AW1 l V3
Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentI must say #4 looks amazing, I love the tones and colors in this shot, obviously processed image but for some reason the tones you've used really attract my attention.
I kind of agree with the others about the rocks,(image #2) but still a great shot!! the tones of the ocean and the ships I like a lot too! thumbs up on some great shots! 2 x Fuji xt1,vg-xt1 grip, Fujinon xf 18-55mm 2.8-4, Fujinon xf 14mm, Fujinon 56mm 1.2.
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that spider from Gregs 52 submission ws certainly one i saw...
lol, i am sure I can find a few other locations which will provide more unique possies with equally challenging access issues
yeah, i had take a step back to avoid using teh glamour glow to remove teh wrinkles and grey hair I don't mind that shot too and thats coming from someone who typically dislikes peeps in landscape shots.
ha! That big blue flower just did not work for me, some clown called nature did not get it in teh right position.
yeah that is a hole or should i say the eye of the face in teh wall? you are right though it does draw the eye away.
yeah fair call, it was a off teh cuff shot and processing, no BW CF card just a BW lens. my first 10 shots where at iso 1250... i have not had a good look at the really blood red sunrise bits, but i did not get a good composition where teh bridge was nicely silhouetted, hence they are on teh back burner.
no, thank you!
The fact that I had to explaain it indicates I did not achieve that, I guess for someone familar with teh area there maybe a connection, however for a random viewer i reckon its a bit confusing. I agree about the removal of that part for a minimalist style shot could work alot better. cheers for the feedback chris.
Thanks Kristen, its funny how people seem to like #4 but i can't get excited about it...oh well..next time. gerry's photography journey
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Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainmentI prefer the first one because of the
technical expertise and equipment needed to take it and the third one for its colours and that stratigic human element in it.
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I hate to say it, but there is no technical expertise nor special equipment for teh first one..just point the thing to the sky and there you have it... Cheers for the feedback Zafra. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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Yes but did you use AutoISO or did you specifically choose (trial and error?) the ISO of 1250 to go with your wide open aperture and 30 sec exposure? D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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I very rarely use AutoISO. In this case I wanted a max shutter of 30 secs so just selected largest f-stop and then dialled in iso to suit - although from previous shots i know you can get up to iso 3200 without too much noise and teh astro noise reduction in the latest version of CNX2 works well. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
Re: Sea Cliff from below - pre-coffee entertainment#1 Very tidy indeed! Did you get any movement at 30 secs?? I think I did! Either that or my tripod.
#2 is nicely seen with your 105. I think the compo leaves it slightly unbalanced. I think the inclusion of the jagged metal helps the overall mood but not sure of it's placement. #3 is super composition. I like how you've rotated the polariser just right so that the patch of waterpuddle can be non-reflective. #4 has photomatix written all over it. I am not a fan of that look. Or is it Dlight? The cliffs look too CGI. #5 is rather electric. I acknowledge the polariser and it's magic but have you added any vibrance to this?
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