My Grand daughter Ava

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My Grand daughter Ava

Postby inmotion on Sat Apr 07, 2012 1:36 pm

D3s 5000Iso sigma 70-200 at f2.8
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Re: My Grand daughter Ava

Postby chrisk on Sat Apr 07, 2012 2:40 pm

congrats ! the first image is gorgeous.
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Re: My Grand daughter Ava

Postby stubbsy on Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:00 pm

#1 is a wonderful, subtle candid. While I like the sepia treatment I'm ambivalent about that strong vignette.
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Re: My Grand daughter Ava

Postby inmotion on Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:08 pm

The finish on the first is NIK software antiqu Plaque--Photographers dislike it and customers absolutely LOVE IT -go figure?
Very proud of our little girl as they had a difficult road till now
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Re: My Grand daughter Ava

Postby Matt. K on Sat Apr 07, 2012 4:23 pm

The pics tell a story and do it very beautifully. No captions needed.
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Re: My Grand daughter Ava

Postby Remorhaz on Sat Apr 07, 2012 4:28 pm

Hi Jim - whilst the processing of the first isn't something I'm particularly keen on myself the image has a very nice feel to it. At first I was thinking I would have preferred the point of focus being a tad further in - e.g. so the baby was more in focus rather than the dads eye but I'm coming around :)

With the second image my suggestion would be to fix the colour balance of the 5th (and maybe 4th and 6th) image down as they really don't feel warm like the rest (esp the 5th). I think the inclusion of the ear is a great idea but I'd probably reshoot it and do it from a different angle - this one doesn't feel right for some reason
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Re: My Grand daughter Ava

Postby inmotion on Sat Apr 07, 2012 6:04 pm

Thanks guys i will have a look at the colour balance
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Re: My Grand daughter Ava

Postby zafra52 on Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:11 pm

I must add my voice to the chorus of
approval for the first image. I like everything
about it even and including the grainy look,
which gives it texture.

I also like the composition of the second and
the contrast between black & white of the
main image and the little colour thumbnails
on the left. However, I would substitute the
pink of the colour text for a more subdue
and complimentary colour. It is too loud and
draws away your attention from the image.
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