A new direction

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A new direction

Postby blacknstormy on Fri May 25, 2012 5:32 pm

Hey everyone, I haven't been in for ages (sorry about that :oops: ), but have started to learn to shoot things other than frogs and dragonflies :shock: :roll:
Here a couple - please be gentle :)
The first is a friends 4 week old little girl - never shot a baby before, but it was fun :)
The second was a try at a 'trash the dress' style shoot while on a workshop - the model was finished and I asked her if she was game - she immediately said yes, and then asked me what trash the dress meant :) This was definitely fun :)
Oh well, here goes ....

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Re: A new direction

Postby Remorhaz on Fri May 25, 2012 6:12 pm

Hi Narelle - the baby is nice and I like the triptych (the colour palette is good and I like the mostly light background for the first but all coloured for top right)

The second for me is too devoid of all detail on the skin. The soft (100% negative clarity) look seems fine on the boby shots but on the model it just looks too airbrushed and fake. Compositionally I'm ok with the rest of the shot - I'd crop the dark area from across the bottom.
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Re: A new direction

Postby Geoff M on Fri May 25, 2012 6:18 pm

Gee Rel, When I read the thread title and saw the first image my first thought was :shock: ,Rel's had a baby :!: But then I read on :)

A far cry from your usual signature stuff, but as usual, you haave excelled. The baby shot(s) is nicely exposed and composed - very sweet. The trash the dress shot I like with the dramatic lighting but I can't help thinking a landscape orientated image would be better suited.
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Re: A new direction

Postby blacknstormy on Fri May 25, 2012 6:23 pm

thanks guys :) Definitely haven't had a baby LOL :)
This is a shot that was processed much 'softer' and is landscape - actually, I think my horizon is a little crooked and it still has the rowers in the background, :? :lol: but see what you think ....
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Re: A new direction

Postby gstark on Fri May 25, 2012 6:35 pm

Hi Rel.

Great to see you here again.

blacknstormy wrote: never shot a baby before, but it was fun :)


You should be using a cannon, not a Canon. :)


The baby with the roses/headband does nothing for me. Otherwise, the other two shots are very good.

I love the trash-the-dress shot. I like the negative space that the portrait orientation gives the image, and the darker section at the bottom adds a sense of depth. The lighting adds drama, and the composition is excellent.

I have no issues with the post that you've applied either; you seem to be wanting have a certain feel to the image, and I think you've achieved that very well.
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Re: A new direction

Postby aim54x on Wed May 30, 2012 12:22 am

Great to hear from you...and these are some great images. I love the "trash the dress" shots!
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Re: A new direction

Postby CraigVTR on Wed May 30, 2012 4:54 pm

Good to see you are still shooting Rel. Love both shots especially the bub, I prefer the first dress shot but think it would be better if the outer/bottom edge of the dress was included.
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Re: A new direction

Postby Matt. K on Wed May 30, 2012 7:04 pm

I just love those weirdly beautiful images that you've put up. Delightful!
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Re: A new direction

Postby zafra52 on Wed May 30, 2012 7:29 pm

The pictures of the baby look a bit over exposed
on my screen. I like the pose. The abandoned bride
looks a bit too dark, but it is an interesting look.
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