Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

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Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby aim54x on Wed May 30, 2012 12:39 am

Some more from my recent visit.

Chinatown by night
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Back Alley Street Art
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Being Watched
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Blending In
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby Remorhaz on Wed May 30, 2012 9:59 am

Cool starburst in #1 Cam :)

I'm liking #2 but the very bright areas on upper left and right are a bit too much - perhaps a little pano croppage of the top and then burning down the bright areas?

I reckon #3 could have the top third cropped off as well - so the person walking towards us is near the top of the frame and the bright channel is more removed
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby zafra52 on Wed May 30, 2012 7:37 pm

I agree with Remorhaz's comments
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby aim54x on Wed May 30, 2012 9:12 pm

Thanks Rodney, Zafira. I will have a play with some crops.

With the last....should I keep the red/orange twine?
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby biggerry on Thu May 31, 2012 12:08 am

Love teh graf shots Cam, the first just demonstrates how good teh D700 is at low ligth stuff - i imagine your loving it and it seems to be suiting your style.

The last appeals to me - maybe its the counterstrike connection that I feel more - on that note you know max payne 3 is out now ;)
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby aim54x on Thu May 31, 2012 1:09 am

biggerry wrote:Love teh graf shots Cam, the first just demonstrates how good teh D700 is at low ligth stuff - i imagine your loving it and it seems to be suiting your style.


Thanks Gerry. The D700 has been a god send for the low light stuff...I didnt even bring a tripod with me at all for this trip. The combination of the D700 and the 17-35 has been awesome and I feel that I may not use the 24-70/28-75 that I have (yes I have both - Nikkor/Tamron SP) as I first thought.

The last appeals to me - maybe its the counterstrike connection that I feel more - on that note you know max payne 3 is out now ;)


I couldnt resist the CS reference...and yes I do know that Max Payne 3 is out...but I am resisting...I have been playing a lot of Global Agenda lately....JetPack + NO ELVES = Winning!
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby surenj on Thu May 31, 2012 1:19 am

aim54x wrote:The last appeals to me - maybe its the counterstrike connection that I feel more - on that note you know max payne 3 is out now
I couldnt resist the CS reference.

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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby aim54x on Thu May 31, 2012 1:36 am

surenj wrote:
aim54x wrote:The last appeals to me - maybe its the counterstrike connection that I feel more - on that note you know max payne 3 is out now
I couldnt resist the CS reference.

Pyro FTW!


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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby surenj on Thu May 31, 2012 1:49 am

aim54x wrote:AOE Assault - Global Agenda!!!

I was thinking more of engineers, pyros and medics etc... :wink:
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby aim54x on Thu May 31, 2012 12:10 pm

surenj wrote:
aim54x wrote:AOE Assault - Global Agenda!!!

I was thinking more of engineers, pyros and medics etc... :wink:


Definitely a TF2 player.....
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Re: Melbourne: Backstreets and Laneways

Postby ozimax on Thu May 31, 2012 8:10 pm

#2 is quite a perspective. Great colour, great subject.
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