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Soccer matchI like this picture because it documents something that
used to happen when I was young - no Play Station, Facebbok or the like - just a ball and a few friends...
Re: Soccer matchHi Zafra
Kids having simple fun... I'm wondering how this would look in mono? and if I was being really picky - cropping off the lone dangling arm on the right and getting the rest of the hand back on the left. D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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Re: Soccer matchThanks for the comments. I didn't realised there were
an orphan arm dangling on the corner and yes the b&w gives it an effect of a bygone era.
Re: Soccer matchIt has a very nice feel to it and does look as though it comes from the past.
I wonder whether it could be improved by making the children a touch brighter - you wouldn't want to take it too far but maybe theyre a bit too much in shadow. You also wouldn't want anything else to be any brighter, so I would think a channel mask in Photoshop.... Applies to the mono version as well as the colour though more to the colour, I think.
Re: Soccer matchThanks for that. I just learned something new. I created a layer mask, which
I haven't done before, and adjusted the aperture, then I converted to BW.
Re: Soccer matchI think that's much better for both versions and I like the slightly faded feel of the colour version. It could be in the 50s except that the motorbike is a bit too recent.
Re: Soccer matchThanks for your help.
Re: Soccer matchmeh, first one all the way for me.
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No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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