Observatory Hill Silhouette...

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Observatory Hill Silhouette...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Sep 11, 2012 10:35 am

I joined Cameron and Marcus in the city for a late afternoon/evening impromptu shoot in The Rocks area.

As I was running a little late I parked at Observatory Hill first for sunset (I only arrived 15 minutes before sunset so there wasn't a lot of time to plan things out). By the time I arrived long shadows were already raking across the grass, the horizon was thick with smog haze which made for some nice colourful bands across the sky and the old fig trees were in full silhouette so I went with it and used the tree's shadow to allow a longer shutter to catch some detail and colour...

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Ten minutes later as the sun was just dipping over the horizon a young woman sat on a bench under the tree to watch the glow of the setting sun. So I set up to place the sun at the end of the dipping tree branch and framed it thus... not sure yet if this works (or whether I should have run to the car for the 70-300 - yeah probably not :)) but...

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Almost ten minutes later again (post sunset), a pano following the bridge heading to North Sydney. You can see the dirty haze banding the horizon which in the absence of any clouds (yet again!, sigh...) produced some interesting colour in the sky

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I then headed down towards Dawes Point under the bridge to join the others
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Re: Observatory Hill Silhouette...

Postby biggerry on Tue Sep 11, 2012 3:25 pm

There is a nice portrait orientation shot in that last image, where those tail lights and the bridge is.... :up:
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Re: Observatory Hill Silhouette...

Postby aim54x on Tue Sep 11, 2012 10:35 pm

I really like the first image....nice strong lines that lead me straight into the image~!
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Re: Observatory Hill Silhouette...

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Sep 12, 2012 8:41 am

biggerry wrote:There is a nice portrait orientation shot in that last image, where those tail lights and the bridge is....


Thanks Gerry - might have to try that with a tele next time I'm there

aim54x wrote:I really like the first image....nice strong lines that lead me straight into the image~!


Thanks Cam
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Re: Observatory Hill Silhouette...

Postby surenj on Wed Sep 12, 2012 12:21 pm

I spy with my little eye; an Amazon kindle type of shot in #2....
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