America Bay - IR

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America Bay - IR

Postby aim54x on Thu Oct 04, 2012 5:24 pm

A last minute decision to grab my D80IR turned out to be great move...

The AF-S 16-85VR proves to be a good IR lens
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The Tokina 12-24 not so good for IR
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The 16-85VR is less happy in the visible spectrum
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and a HDR just for good measure
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby stubbsy on Thu Oct 04, 2012 7:04 pm

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I really like #1, but the lens falre ion #2 distracts me. The IR is better than the "real" as well for these.
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby chrisk on Thu Oct 04, 2012 8:58 pm

x2
he colours you got on the first are awesome. your WB is dead on.
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby biggerry on Thu Oct 04, 2012 10:02 pm

+1 for number 1

although a bit bright - possibly tone teh brightness down a bit and also add a fraction of vignetting?
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Oct 04, 2012 11:28 pm

Also +1 for #1 - although I reckon part of why #2 is worse than #1 and seems more washed out is you almost included the sun in the frame in #2 and thus the huge flare and loss of contrast.
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby aim54x on Fri Oct 05, 2012 11:42 am

Thanks guys.

Rooz wrote:the colours you got on the first are awesome. your WB is dead on.

I did some adjustment in CNX2 using colour control points to get that blue, but I have found that my current custom preset is good so I have sticking with it.

Remorhaz wrote:Also +1 for #1 - although I reckon part of why #2 is worse than #1 and seems more washed out is you almost included the sun in the frame in #2 and thus the huge flare and loss of contrast.


Unfortunately the Tokina 12-24mm f/4 just flairs..I have quite a few images from the day with that lens and anytime the sun is in the same general direction as you are shooting then you get that flair. It also seems to hot spot at times as well.
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby Reschsmooth on Fri Oct 05, 2012 3:20 pm

I agree, the two IR versions smash the 'real' versions easily. The first is the pick.
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby zafra52 on Sun Oct 07, 2012 11:12 am

The 1st one for me, too.
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Re: America Bay - IR

Postby Matt. K on Sun Oct 07, 2012 6:26 pm

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For something rather special...try some head and shoulder portraits with IR. Use different models, (try someone with freckles) and get them to wear some silk. This is where IR excels in my opinion.
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