Sculptures 2012 - HDR

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Sculptures 2012 - HDR

Postby aim54x on Fri Oct 26, 2012 7:59 pm

Sorry for the delay in getting some images, in light of those real estate pics I thought it would only be fair that I post some HDR attempts..>COMMENTS PLEASE

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Re: Sculptures 2012 - HDR

Postby Remorhaz on Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:04 pm

Hi Cam - none of these look too outrageous so the HDR has definitely been tamed

At least the first three appear too flat for me - even the last but the look is ok for this one with some touches of light on the ground
In the second theres some ugly artifacting in the sky on the left (jpeg compression?)
I like the idea of the composition of VIEW :) how big were the letters?
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Re: Sculptures 2012 - HDR

Postby aim54x on Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:08 pm

Yes that was blow out that I didnt manage to bracket beyond + some JPG artifact.

The letter on "VIEW" would have been a good 70cm tall.
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Re: Sculptures 2012 - HDR

Postby Matt. K on Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:49 pm

#2....you've caught the light and captured a beautiful landscape/seascape. The image has a lovely warm glow that just makes the veiwer want to be there.
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Re: Sculptures 2012 - HDR

Postby aim54x on Sun Oct 28, 2012 9:25 pm

Matt. K wrote:#2....you've caught the light and captured a beautiful landscape/seascape. The image has a lovely warm glow that just makes the veiwer want to be there.


Thanks Matt...I guess I will have to have a go with CS5's content aware fill and see if I can fix the sky
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Re: Sculptures 2012 - HDR

Postby stubbsy on Sun Oct 28, 2012 9:55 pm

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#1 is way better than the shot of the same object I didn't like in your other post (again water a bit too cyan on my monitor)
The rest don't grab me (maybe I'm just not into "too dark" images at present :-))
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