Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators
Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent. Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature. Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread. Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.
Previous topic • Next topic
8 posts
• Page 1 of 1
Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...Spent a few days around Christmas at my parents house. My dad is a keen gardener (unlike his son ) so they have a lovely flower filled back yard and a feeder for the birds. I'd brought my 50-500mm Sigma (BigMos) lens so I figured I'd try a little attempt at birding. The weather was pretty dull most of the time we were there (at least at the times the birds decided to come and feed) so we were pushing ISO to get any shots.
D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
Re: Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...Rodney
I really think you've nailed it with #2 here - DOF is spot on and the expression/eye contact are great. #3 on the other hand really bothers me - did you add a vignette or was there something else causing that effect? Either way that distracts me from the bird. Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything. *** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
Re: Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...
Thanks Peter - the vignette is all mine I'm afraid... here it is sans vignette D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
Re: Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...I can see why you used some vignette on the third image as the background is tending to distract.
You might like to attempt layering the whole background in a manner to tone it down across the whole frame. Photography is not a crime, but perhaps my abuse of artistic license is?
Re: Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...#2 caught my eye due to the nice compo and colors. I don't know how flitty these creatures are but It's a great capture nonetheless.
#3 If you are keen to improve this one, perhaps also clone that twig out of it's body; for the background, you could colorise it to the opposite color of brown (not sure which it is) and see whether you can make the birdie pop. It's a tough one I think. [or just crop the hell out of it]
Re: Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...Love the first two pick-tures Rodney. Yes, we have these blighters everywhere you go in Coffs, but you have to love them.
It's a pity it was so dark on the day as I think greater DOF would add to the images of the lorikeets, but I understand your need to shoot wide open. President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8 "And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
Re: Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...I love the colours in the 1st and 2nd. Of these two,
I think the 2nd is superb.
Re: Who's a Pretty Birdy Then?...
Thanks Mj and Suren - sounds like it might be more work than the image is worth unfortunately. I found it difficult to get anything decent of the pidgeon style birds - they were very nervous and flew off when I moved or if other birds arrived.
Thanks Ozi - should have seen what I attempted the next day - it was even duller/darker - I had a number of shots at ISO's up around 10,000
Thanks Zafra D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
Previous topic • Next topic
8 posts
• Page 1 of 1
|