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Postby Remorhaz on Tue Jan 08, 2013 4:26 pm

A long (150 second) exposure beneath the twin Shoalhaven River bridges taken just on sunset using the B+W ten stop ND filter...

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Postby Matt. K on Tue Jan 08, 2013 6:28 pm

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That is beautiful. I can see it as a large fine print...on Hannemulle matte paper......1 metre x 2 metre and sympathetically framed. No one could walk past it without falling in love with it.
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Postby surenj on Tue Jan 08, 2013 6:42 pm

Noice! Any detail to be had under the bridges??
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Postby Mj on Tue Jan 08, 2013 8:08 pm

:agree:

A fine example of b&w landscape shining.
Complex but simple, geometric.. yet not quite.
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Postby aim54x on Tue Jan 08, 2013 9:11 pm

Simply stunning Rodney! I love the tones and contrast!
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Postby chrisk on Tue Jan 08, 2013 9:54 pm

I could be articulate or even a little anally retentive like matt's comment...but i will just say this....

B A D A S S !!!!!
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Jan 09, 2013 8:26 am

Nice shot, and having lived in Nowra (now a long time ago) I've never seen a picture of the bridges from this angle - or the clever use of the ND.
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Postby Remorhaz on Wed Jan 09, 2013 9:27 am

Matt. K wrote:Rodney, That is beautiful. I can see it as a large fine print...on Hannemulle matte paper......1 metre x 2 metre and sympathetically framed. No one could walk past it without falling in love with it.

Thanks Matt :cheers:

surenj wrote:Noice! Any detail to be had under the bridges??

Probably - I was protecting the bright highlights of the sky when I shot it tho - I've already done a bit of shadow recovery on this version (globally) but I expect I could do some more locally just under the bridges

Mj wrote:A fine example of b&w landscape shining. Complex but simple, geometric.. yet not quite.

Thanks Mj

aim54x wrote:Simply stunning Rodney! I love the tones and contrast!

:up:

Rooz wrote:I could be articulate or even a little anally retentive like matt's comment...but i will just say this.... B A D A S S !!!!!
 LOL - thanks Chris :)

Alpha_7 wrote:Nice shot, and having lived in Nowra (now a long time ago) I've never seen a picture of the bridges from this angle - or the clever use of the ND.

Thanks Craig (I grew up here - I still remember when it was just the one bridge - my parents still live in Bomaderry)
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Postby ozimax on Wed Jan 09, 2013 6:05 pm

Very nice indeed. It must have been exceptionally still at the time.
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Postby Remorhaz on Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:58 am

ozimax wrote:Very nice indeed. It must have been exceptionally still at the time.


Thanks Ozi - I can't remember specifically... probably :)

Someone else suggested I crop the image to remove the distracting pilon on the left - I compromised with a little cropping and a little cloning with the following (plus for Suren extracted a little more detail under the bridges :)) - thoughts?

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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Jan 10, 2013 1:30 pm

I like the new one every better! (I lived in Jasmine Drive in Bomaderry and Berry Street in Nowra) way back in '85-89.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:24 pm

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I looked at this yesterday, but didn't comment since I had nothing to add, but I must say the revised crop makes a great image signifcantly better :up:
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Postby aim54x on Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:45 pm

Yes the rework gains a bit more!
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Postby zafra52 on Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:04 pm

Superb image.
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Postby Remorhaz on Fri Jan 11, 2013 5:09 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:I like the new one every better! (I lived in Jasmine Drive in Bomaderry and Berry Street in Nowra) way back in '85-89.

stubbsy wrote:Rodney I looked at this yesterday, but didn't comment since I had nothing to add, but I must say the revised crop makes a great image signifcantly better :up:

aim54x wrote:Yes the rework gains a bit more!

zafra52 wrote:Superb image.


Thanks guys - very pleased...
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