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Skyline

Postby zafra52 on Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:08 am

Brisbane Skyline from Kangaroo Point at Night.

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Re: Skyline

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:01 pm

Hi Zafra - looks perhaps a bit oversharp or something to me? You got a little twilight colour tho.
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Re: Skyline

Postby zafra52 on Tue Jan 08, 2013 9:44 am

Hi,

I did not sharp the photo, but I adjusted the
"Clarity" feature in Raw and then in Photoshop
I adjusted tone, contrast and colour. Then, I
reduced the photo to its present dimensions
creating the effect of a sharper image.

Because there is so much light in the city streets
you get that that effect around the buildings and
I assuming is the light bouncing from the buildings
and streets being reflected upwards.

Thanks for the comment.
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Re: Skyline

Postby zafra52 on Tue Jan 08, 2013 10:16 am

Perhaps you prefer this version?

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Re: Skyline

Postby CraigVTR on Tue Jan 08, 2013 12:01 pm

Hi Zafra I prefer the second version as it does not look as busy in the busy well lit areas, did you just reduce the amount of the clarity slider? I am finding in lightroom the clarity slider will sometimes detract from rather than add to the image, depends on the image.
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Re: Skyline

Postby zafra52 on Thu Jan 10, 2013 1:39 pm

Yes, I did. Thanks for the comments.
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Re: Skyline

Postby stubbsy on Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:26 pm

Fantastic image and I too prefer the more subtle second version. The clarity slider can be a bit harsh when pushed too far and that detracts from the first version,
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Re: Skyline

Postby zafra52 on Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:01 pm

Thank you all for the comments and suggestions.
Stubbsy, I agree with you and I also like the
second image better now.
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