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City Blues...

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Feb 14, 2013 7:30 pm

Didn't have to go far for this one - taken out my bedroom window with the bigstopper ten stop ND and heliopan CPL on the 70-200.

We had some nice colour in the sky (clouds) and they were moving nicely so I figured we'd try a long exposure - in this case 300 seconds (5 minutes) - I had to bump the ISO to 400 so I didn't have have to wait too long (20 minutes). Taken just as the sun was setting so I'd get some nice reflections in the glass.

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Re: City Blues...

Postby aim54x on Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:04 am

interesting colours, but that isnt a bad view from your bedroom window!
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Postby gstark on Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:16 am

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Wot he sez.
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Re: City Blues...

Postby Remorhaz on Fri Feb 15, 2013 10:28 am

aim54x wrote:interesting colours, but that isnt a bad view from your bedroom window!

gstark wrote:^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Wot he sez.


Thanks - note this is at 200mm so it's isn't quite as good as just this :) - this is what I could frame between the trees :)
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Re: City Blues...

Postby PiroStitch on Fri Feb 15, 2013 2:20 pm

Lovely view. Try doing a black and white version as the stationary buildings look like a very nice contrast to the sky and trees.
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Re: City Blues...

Postby Remorhaz on Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:46 pm

PiroStitch wrote:Lovely view. Try doing a black and white version as the stationary buildings look like a very nice contrast to the sky and trees.


Thanks Piro - hadn't even thought of that...

What do people think (and of this particular conversion)?

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Re: City Blues...

Postby PiroStitch on Sat Feb 16, 2013 1:34 am

Nice one, but I'd increase the exposure in the sky about a third and at least half stop for the shadow detail of the trees.
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Re: City Blues...

Postby Remorhaz on Sat Feb 16, 2013 8:25 am

PiroStitch wrote:Nice one, but I'd increase the exposure in the sky about a third and at least half stop for the shadow detail of the trees.


Thanks - take 2 :)

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Re: City Blues...

Postby zafra52 on Sun Feb 17, 2013 12:02 pm

I prefer the colour version, as the colours indicate the
picture was taken after sunset or early before sunrise.
The B&W version would work better either if taken during
night so the viewer can see clearly it's a night picture or
during the day with more light to give you a wider range
of white, blacks and greys, I think.
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