The Bike racer

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The Bike racer

Postby Nikon boy on Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:48 pm

Took this recently with my new D800e which compared to my D3s well......she is no speed demon but is adequate i feel

Taken at 70mm with Nikon 24-70 @ 125 iso and 1/500 sec processed in LR4

[url][url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/open_shutter_media/8946166278/]Image[/url]
NWL_1832 by nikon boy1, on Flickr/url]

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Re: The Bike racer

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Jun 05, 2013 11:46 am

Nice timing on the image but the vignette is way too strong I feel
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Re: The Bike racer

Postby Matt. K on Wed Jun 05, 2013 6:52 pm

Lovely image. Has lots of visual impact and technically very nice. I agree that the vignette is far to strong. I don't know if the image has been cropped but I also find that the bikers head is too close to the top of the frame...but these are minor quibbles and it's a great shot.
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Postby chrisk on Wed Jun 05, 2013 11:21 pm

It looks a bit over processed.
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Re: The Bike racer

Postby Sylvia on Thu Jun 06, 2013 7:54 pm

Good job on the capture Nikon Boy.

I'd just crop a little less, have a bit more room around the rider and ease off on the in vignette.

Those legs look like they have done some miles.
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Re: The Bike racer

Postby petermmc on Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:32 pm

I think you have captured the image really well. The definition in his legs is outstanding. I just bought a new bike today and clearly I have some work to do.

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Re: The Bike racer

Postby Nikon boy on Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:19 pm

Hi Guys

Havent replied as i have been in hospital with a large kidney stone !!!

so thanks for the suggestions and compliments, have gone back and revisited the shot

Hows this ?
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Postby chrisk on Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:59 pm

For my taste it looks better, more naturally rendered. I also like that you've added more space up top.
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