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Seconds Count...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:44 pm

Mj's wish is my command... or something like that... :)

What a difference a few seconds can make to a seascape composition...

I've created a quadriptych of four shots taken in the minutes leading up to sunset to highlight how changing a few variables through intelligent use of camera functions and tools along with appropriate timing of when to start the capture can dramatically alter the final result for the same exact scene.

The images all have the exact same location, framing and composition; same focal length and were taken within minutes of each other - the difference is in waiting for and timing of the moment to take the photo based on the movement of the water and predicting where it will go during the exposure interval and adjusting other camera functions (mostly related to the length of time for the exposure - in this case the exposures range from half a second through to 240 seconds at the extremes) to get four very different looks.

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The first a medium fifteen (15) second exposure timed for when there was minimal water movement and the water has run out - the effect of the shutter time is a softer dreamy look to the clouds and sky and what water is moving slowly turns to glass (where the polariser cuts through) or the faster moving stuff in the distance to milk

The second is a shorter exposure (but still six (6) seconds) timed for when there was maximum water movement with a large body of water moving through the scene and across the rocks. The shorter shutter time also results in less time for motion of the sky and water so that the moving components have a more stringy textured look where we can actually see the path of motion rather than it turning to a misty blur

The third a very very long exposure created using the Lee BigStopper. This resulted in a four minute exposure (using the Lee 0.6 Hard Grad ND, Heliopan CPL and the Lee BigStopper) for a really dreamy seaside look where all moving texture is gone and we have sharply defined static objects sitting in a sea of soft tonal blur from the moving components

The last at the other end of the spectrum is a relatively short exposure (half a second) designed to really highlight the texture of the moving water and is timed for maximum impact (after most of the wave has crashed over the stones and we're just seeing the curving rippling water flow and backwash)
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Re: Seconds Count...

Postby Mj on Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:17 pm

Hey Rodney... I'm continuing to develop an interest in this idea.... it might even find me getting up early (well maybe once things warm up).
I think for it to really work though it needs a couple of tweaks.

Firstly to adjust the white balance of the stopper image to match as close as possible to the other images.
You might be able to achieve that with the image you have... it might require a little brutal PP to get there.

Secondly I think the set actually requires a really quick exposure... think maybe 1/250?
I doubt you got something like that, or for that matter, it was possible with the available light whilst you were there but a set like then has the complete range from frozen time and motion through to ultra slowmo.
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Re: Seconds Count...

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Jun 19, 2013 5:09 pm

Thanks Mj

Mj wrote:Firstly to adjust the white balance of the stopper image to match as close as possible to the other images.


I considered that and it would be easy but I liked the difference it created - I might do one with the altered WB so you can see tho

Secondly I think the set actually requires a really quick exposure... think maybe 1/250?


Yep I knew what you were getting at when you first mentioned it but as you say I don't have anything that fast - it would be possible but you'd need to shoot that frame early on (when it's brightest) and likely bump ISO and open the aperture a bit (f/5.6 or f/8)
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Re: Seconds Count...

Postby zafra52 on Wed Jun 19, 2013 7:12 pm

Now, I prefer this composition to the previous versions
with only two photos.
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Re: Seconds Count...

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:31 am

zafra52 wrote:Now, I prefer this composition to the previous versions with only two photos.


Cheers Zafra :)
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Re: Seconds Count...

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:32 am

and for Mj - here is one with the WB in the BigStopper image adjusted to more match the other images:

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