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Does this Work for You?...

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Sep 15, 2013 3:47 pm

Thoughts? Composition? Processing?

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Re: Does this Work for You?...

Postby chrisk on Sun Sep 15, 2013 3:51 pm

not for me personally.
I think if you were shooting from a lower angle it may have worked better. hard to tell if having the whole lady in the frame or not would have improved it but I suspect it may have. the mono treatment is bang on.
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Re: Does this Work for You?...

Postby TonyT on Sun Sep 15, 2013 4:16 pm

Not for me either.I like the path effect with the paving I like to see more of that on focus.
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Re: Does this Work for You?...

Postby Matt. K on Sun Sep 15, 2013 5:15 pm

A mysterious image....beautiful tones and wonderful composition. Just some little element missing but I have no idea what. Something to link the figure to the foreground perhaps. Paste something in and have a play around with it.
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Re: Does this Work for You?...

Postby zafra52 on Sun Sep 15, 2013 6:37 pm

I regrettably have to agree with the above.
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