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Fish shop fruit shop

Postby Matt. K on Sat Feb 08, 2014 10:13 pm

My little X-Pro never fails to impress me.


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Re: Fish shop fruit shop

Postby zafra52 on Sun Feb 09, 2014 10:06 am

I like them both. The first one because it makes you stop and interpret what you are seeing. The first
thing one sees is the boat and the sign and then an excursion of discovery takes place and the
second because of the perspective and colours.
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Re: Fish shop fruit shop

Postby biggerry on Wed Feb 12, 2014 9:53 pm

love the first Matt, now, the second, can you let me know your thoughts were when composing with the big black (light bar) cutting across teh bottom?

I feel there is so much more potential in that scene, but I suspect i am seeing it from a very different perspective than you. I feel the sweet colours of the fruit and veg need more attention, need to be isolated, not disjointed and cut...

as always Matt, you got me thinking.
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