Too dark? not enough detail in the jetty or trees?
I really wanted to simplify the image and let the composition speak more than the colours, which in this particular image were actually quite nice too.
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Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.
Comments, suggestions or critique welcome, i'll take the good the bad and the ugly.
Too dark? not enough detail in the jetty or trees? I really wanted to simplify the image and let the composition speak more than the colours, which in this particular image were actually quite nice too. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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The boat is a tad small, but the jetty and the reflections look great. it may work better displayed large
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Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.
Gerry
A knockout image....can just imagine it framed up at a couple of metres long. The only suggestion I can make is to lighten up the jetty so that it drags the eye to the boat.. Regards
Matt. K
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I agree with the above comments.
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Spectacular.
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Wonderfully so.
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Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.
yeah I am guessing it looks better full size
spot on Matt, i seem to have a bit of a problem atm with brightness in alot of my images
cheers guys. gerry's photography journey
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Love it.....maybe reduce the vignette a little?
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