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What lies beneath

Postby biggerry on Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:19 pm

Botany bay, could be anything down there, a few dead bodies?

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Re: What lies beneath

Postby petermmc on Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:38 pm

I like the way the oyster shell encrusted wooden beams add to mystique of what lies beneath. Almost spooky.

Great photo.

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Re: What lies beneath

Postby Geoff M on Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:39 pm

I don't know about dead bodies beneath, but I think there may be some ghosts at the end of the pier.

Great sky and the colour in the foreground water diminishing to the pastel tones in the mid ground is fantastic. Nicely done Gerry.
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Postby chrisk on Thu Apr 03, 2014 6:06 pm

It's a beautiful image and the idea but to me it feels weird as a portrait orientation. The jarring crop of the pier is very distracting for me personally. I don't know if that's the intention or not.


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Re: What lies beneath

Postby Matt. K on Thu Apr 03, 2014 10:46 pm

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Re: What lies beneath

Postby sirhc55 on Thu Apr 03, 2014 11:01 pm

Wot Matt sed
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Re: What lies beneath

Postby Remorhaz on Fri Apr 04, 2014 11:59 am

Geoff M wrote:I don't know about dead bodies beneath, but I think there may be some ghosts at the end of the pier


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Re: What lies beneath

Postby colin_12 on Sat Apr 05, 2014 7:24 am

Matt. K wrote:Gerry
You are an artist!

Yep. I really like the treatment you have given this image, it does not feel overdone, but quite relaxing and smooth.
Rooz has a point with the orientation though, was there a reason for this?
I was to taken with the image at first to even consider technical stuff about it, I guess that means it is good.
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Re: What lies beneath

Postby gstark on Sat Apr 05, 2014 8:33 am

I'd like to see this in mono.
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Re: What lies beneath

Postby biggerry on Sat Apr 05, 2014 11:46 pm

petermmc wrote:I like the way the oyster shell encrusted wooden beams add to mystique of what lies beneath. Almost spooky.
Great photo.
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:) cheers that was my intent

Geoff M wrote:I don't know about dead bodies beneath, but I think there may be some ghosts at the end of the pier.
Great sky and the colour in the foreground water diminishing to the pastel tones in the mid ground is fantastic. Nicely done Gerry.

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Geoff M wrote:I don't know about dead bodies beneath, but I think there may be some ghosts at the end of the pier

:)


yeah i asked the fisherman to hold still which they did...for the first 30 seconds :) as for the dead bodies...ya'all need a history lesson in botany bay :)

Rooz wrote:It's a beautiful image and the idea but to me it feels weird as a portrait orientation. The jarring crop of the pier is very distracting for me personally. I don't know if that's the intention or not.
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colin_12 wrote:Yep. I really like the treatment you have given this image, it does not feel overdone, but quite relaxing and smooth.
Rooz has a point with the orientation though, was there a reason for this?
I was to taken with the image at first to even consider technical stuff about it, I guess that means it is good.


Regarding the portrait orientation, in this scene there is a sailing club to the left and not much to the right side, which when taken in landscape (of which i did take one) i found it too cluttered. I do however take the point that the left hand side does feel jarred and cutoff.. :up:

Matt. K wrote:Gerry
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sirhc55 wrote:Wot Matt sed

everybody is a artist in their own right. :up: cheers guys.

gstark wrote:I'd like to see this in mono.


your wish is my command. BW was my first choice for this image (which is slightly different to the colour version btw.

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Postby chrisk on Sun Apr 06, 2014 8:55 am

Post the fern pic on the forum please.
Thank you. lol


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Re: What lies beneath

Postby gstark on Sun Apr 06, 2014 10:17 am

Gerry,

Now that's what I call art. (Not that I'd know)

Thanks; masterful.
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Re: What lies beneath

Postby zafra52 on Sun Apr 06, 2014 5:13 pm

Both versions of the photo are excellent. I wonder if a portrait of the same would had worked as well.
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