A fiery light

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A fiery light

Postby Matt. K on Sun Jul 26, 2015 7:50 pm

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Courtesy of PShop of course.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby zafra52 on Tue Jul 28, 2015 3:53 pm

Lovely shot. You and Mr PShop must be very good friends. :D
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Re: A fiery light

Postby gstark on Wed Jul 29, 2015 8:01 am

Magic.

And true mastery.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jul 29, 2015 9:45 am

Matt, this is one of the best shots I have seen from you and as has been said, masterful. Just one minor niggle on my part, I find the sloping horizon a distraction.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby zafra52 on Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:06 am

Now that you mention the horizon...nope! All I can see it is a blurred line going down to the right demarcating the floor ending and a wall starting and the blurred four light panes of a window letting some light in in a room. So in fact the shallow depth of field and the blurred glass panes of a window/door and the line gives it a contextual meaning to me and it makes me think, perhaps wrongly, that the plant was in a room bathed by the golden light of a sun setting from behind the camera gently bathing the floor and wall.
Of course, we have the photographer's admission of getting Mr Pshop's help perhaps to boost the colour to making it more orange and golden than it was.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby sirhc55 on Mon Aug 10, 2015 8:45 am

I bow to your young eyes master - going to the optician on Friday hehehe
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Re: A fiery light

Postby biggerry on Mon Aug 10, 2015 12:34 pm

very nice Matt.

Its irrelevant how you got to the final result or what means you used, it's the initial viewer impact and not the subsequent deconstruction of the image that matters.

taking a picture for the representation of reality is boring (unless you're a photojourno)... creating a picture as art is interesting...and this is art for me.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby zafra52 on Mon Aug 10, 2015 3:27 pm

... creating a picture as art is interesting...and this is art for me.

I agree, it's a lovely photo and the elements are complimentary. My
You and Mr PShop must be very good friends.

was meant as an acknowledgment to
Courtesy of PShop of course.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby petermmc on Mon Aug 10, 2015 5:53 pm

Brilliant.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby ozimax on Wed Aug 12, 2015 10:57 am

I can't see anything??
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Re: A fiery light

Postby gstark on Wed Aug 12, 2015 11:48 am

ozimax wrote:I can't see anything??


Are your eyes open?

Are you wearing your glasses?

Are facing in the right direction?
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Re: A fiery light

Postby ozimax on Thu Aug 13, 2015 11:20 am

gstark wrote:
ozimax wrote:I can't see anything??


Are your eyes open?

Are you wearing your glasses?

Are facing in the right direction?


No I was asleep... :biglaugh: Now I'm awake after some java and sleep. (11 hours drive to Melbourne airport, then flight to Sydney, then 8 hours drive to Coffs makes for a dopey traveller/peruser of photographics..)

Nice photo and very unusual.
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Re: A fiery light

Postby biggerry on Tue Aug 18, 2015 11:47 am

zafra52 wrote:
... creating a picture as art is interesting...and this is art for me.

I agree, it's a lovely photo and the elements are complimentary. My
You and Mr PShop must be very good friends.

was meant as an acknowledgment to
Courtesy of PShop of course.


Hey zafra, sorry for the late reply - just to be clear, i was not having a go at you in this post :up: more just a general comment about the initial impact of a image. In this case it is obviously processed, however that was not my first thought... it was more 'yeah that looks nice'
I then deconstructed the image and processing in my head ;)
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