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Dad's Hands

Postby AlistairF on Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:59 am

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Postby cyanide on Sat Mar 19, 2005 1:13 am

What a lovely, simple image. :)

I am sure others will have suggestions on how it could be improved, but for my standards, this is just fabulous. Top work. 8)
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Postby Eunosdriver on Sat Mar 19, 2005 1:52 am

Only 2 things hold this back from being perfect for me; the unbalanced background- dark to light, and those fingernails ! (dad's, that is). Otherwise, please can you share your technique for B&W conversion, the contrast is lovely.
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Postby AlistairF on Sat Mar 19, 2005 2:34 am

Yes, dad's fingernails are disgusting (not mine thankfully!). But that's how the moment was captured. I actually like the diagonal contrast as it adds balance.

As for B&W technique, check out http://forum.d70users.com/viewtopic.php?t=1957

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Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Mar 19, 2005 5:47 am

I don't see anything to criticise in this pic. :)
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Postby birddog114 on Sat Mar 19, 2005 5:54 am

The pic has lot of meanings! great thoughts!
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Postby Greg B on Sat Mar 19, 2005 6:00 am

Beautiful shot Alistair, well done
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Postby thaddeus on Sat Mar 19, 2005 7:38 am

nice photograph, particularly the detail flanked by the light and shade
however, while a technically good photo, the fingernails turn me off
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Postby xerubus on Sat Mar 19, 2005 8:45 am

beautiful shot...

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Postby gstark on Sat Mar 19, 2005 8:51 am

I love it.

Delightfully simple, and very emotionally stirring to me. It actually brings back memories of when Leigh was born.

As to the fingernails, they only add to this image for me. Not every person is perfect, and that's how it is.
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Postby dooda on Sat Mar 19, 2005 8:56 am

Yep, those nails are not perfect, they are his and that gives the pic a special familiale quality that distinguishes it from another pic you might see in a magazine ad or postered in a female college dorm room or something. It's an absolute terrific picture. Can't wait to see more of your stuff.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Mar 19, 2005 9:18 am

Dave - in this shot you have emulated the great Rodin to good effect. I really like everything about this shot. Just realised it’s not a landscape :wink:

Actually I am wrong, it is a landscape of emotion. . .
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Postby rokkstar on Sat Mar 19, 2005 10:17 am

Alastair,

I think its a terrific shot.
And I'm rather upset, because that is exactly the idea I was playing with for the new challange. THat my friend is exrtremely uncanny. I've already taken some test shots on different backgrounds and diffrent hands/feet combos.

Nice one

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Postby mic on Sat Mar 19, 2005 11:19 am

AlistairF, WOW :shock:

Absolutely Jam Packed Emotional, what more can I say.

Well done, what was your camera settings.

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Postby AlistairF on Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:54 pm

mic wrote:AlistairF, WOW :shock:

Absolutely Jam Packed Emotional, what more can I say.

Well done, what was your camera settings.

Mic. :wink:


Mic,

I white balanced with a grey card and used the white-wedding curve with moderate color saturation. The shot was natual light taken near a window.

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Postby mic on Sat Mar 19, 2005 1:22 pm

Alistair,

That sounds good.

What F Stop & Shutter Speed. ?

Thanks,

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Postby AlistairF on Sat Mar 19, 2005 1:41 pm

mic wrote:Alistair,

That sounds good.

What F Stop & Shutter Speed. ?

Thanks,

Mic. :wink:


Thanks for asking Mic, I realised when looking at the EXIF that I was using my 50mm 1.4. I've updated the original post with the info.

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Postby stormygirl on Sat Mar 19, 2005 1:58 pm

Alistair, this is just beautiful! I have tried on numerous occasions to capture something like this in B&W of my children's hands, but did not quite capture what you have here! I also tried with feet, but they wriggled around too much, and when they were sleeping, they would all be covered up!

This is pure magical, I love it! Once I scan my B&W film pics, I will posts them in the Film and Non Digital section for people to critique, but it may take a few days!

This is just wonderful!
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Postby big pix on Sat Mar 19, 2005 3:22 pm

This image is one of the best I have seen on this forum........ you have set a bench mark for yourself.......... well done
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Postby Sean on Sat Mar 19, 2005 6:25 pm

Fantastic shot mate, creates a warm feeling inside
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Postby MATT on Sun Mar 20, 2005 6:27 am

Great pic, that is one I am going to try to replicate with my own children.

I love it

Good work

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Postby kipper on Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:37 am

Sigh, looks like I'm the only one that can't view it :)

Seems like some sites block 59.x.x.x addresses, which is what I have. Guess I'll speak to internode, who will speak to your hosting provider :)
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Postby kipper on Sun Mar 20, 2005 11:11 am

Great shot Allistair. See a lot of photos like this for baby work. Mainly either of the hands or feet. But this has a nice touch showing the size comparison between Dad's hands and the Baby's feet.
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Postby meicw on Sun Mar 20, 2005 11:24 am

GREAT shot. Well thought out and executed. I too can not find anything that is wrong with the pic.

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Postby kipper on Sun Mar 20, 2005 12:28 pm

Well the only bad points are the blown highlights on the right hand side, but being B&W I think it kind of works.
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Postby AlistairF on Sun Mar 20, 2005 2:05 pm

kipper wrote:Well the only bad points are the blown highlights on the right hand side, but being B&W I think it kind of works.


Thanks for the kind remarks. The blown highlights work to my advantage when I printed it on archival art paper. the tones fade away into the paper colour. I wish I could show you all how well the Epson R800 does B&W on a good matte paper, the screen images does not do justice compared to printed images.

Maybe I'll bring some paper output to the next Melbourne meet.

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Postby kipper on Sun Mar 20, 2005 3:19 pm

AllistairF that'd be great. I'd really love to get the Epson R800 or the 2100. Guess I'll have to keep saving :(
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Postby AlistairF on Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:23 pm

kipper wrote:AllistairF that'd be great. I'd really love to get the Epson R800 or the 2100. Guess I'll have to keep saving :(


Wait for the R1800 to come out (already in USA). It's the A3+ version of the R800 and better print quality that the 2100.
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Postby birddog114 on Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:33 pm

AlistairF wrote:
kipper wrote:AllistairF that'd be great. I'd really love to get the Epson R800 or the 2100. Guess I'll have to keep saving :(


Wait for the R1800 to come out (already in USA). It's the A3+ version of the R800 and better print quality that the 2100.


R1800 will be released next month in the US!, price in Australia is than 1k if released to this market.
Nothing annouced by Epson Australia yet, bear in mind some products may not available in Australia as Epson P-2000 or Epson 2200. Some products targeted North America or Europe and we're Down Under they may forget or not include us in their list :wink:
So wait until we hear from Epson Australia.
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Postby mudder on Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:38 pm

Wow, beautiful emotional image, very inspiring...
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