Portrait of William, my Nephew

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Portrait of William, my Nephew

Postby kipper on Tue Mar 22, 2005 10:43 pm

Ok for my 1000th post I decided to put up this portrait on smugmug.
No shooting info for it as yet as I'm in the process of doing other things.
Was shot with the Kit Lens iirc.


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Postby marcus on Tue Mar 22, 2005 10:51 pm

This is a great photo. As a dad I shoot heaps of shots of my kids. I throw out plenty .... but this is is keeper kipper!! Pardon the pun. Well done.
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Postby mudder on Wed Mar 23, 2005 8:54 pm

This is terrific! Fantastic expression and seems to be saying "just you wait til I'm outta these bars!"...

And congrats on reaching 1000 posts too!
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Postby ozimax on Wed Mar 23, 2005 9:32 pm

marcus wrote:This is a great photo. As a dad I shoot heaps of shots of my kids. I throw out plenty .... but this is is keeper kipper!! Pardon the pun. Well done.


Marcus, you're not a policeman are you? Then it would be a copper keeper kipper? If that was the case, would that be starting a copper keeper kipper caper?

Better stop here or risk being thrown off the forum...:-)

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Postby Matt. K on Wed Mar 23, 2005 10:05 pm

Kipper
Has this image had a levels adjustment applied?
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Postby kipper on Thu Mar 24, 2005 7:54 am

Matt not as far as I know, unless white wedding curve does it. I opened up NCE, went to Curves and selected Load. Then changed filename to ANY the opened up pointandshoot.ntc (white wedding). Which I think made it look quite bright, so I think I did -1/4 to -1/2 EV and a USM.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Mar 24, 2005 5:48 pm

Thanks Kipper
It's a lovely image but there seems to be something wrong with the skintones...it's as if an excessive levels or curves adjustment was made. The overall tonality just doesn't look right on my monitor. I think maybe you should reopen the RAW file and just check it side by side with the posted image. I am really interested in what might have happened here because I have seen it before on some of my own images when I have overdone the levels or the curves.
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Postby kipper on Thu Mar 24, 2005 5:55 pm

Yeah, I'm not sure but when I opened pointandshoot curve via NCE it sort of changed the skin tones and I thought it looked odd myself but then I started convincing myself it looked right. Let me post without. Actually just checked the PSD file in PS and it looks fine there but in IE totally different. In IE the skintones look too red, whereas in PS the skintone is more natural.

Ok just looked in Firefox and it displays the skintones the same.

Tried PNG, same there it's wierd.
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Postby kipper on Thu Mar 24, 2005 9:45 pm

Ok this is interesting. I just read somewhere that to save to JPEG from Photoshop one should use Save for Web. Instead of the usual Save option. Never realised this, had used ImageReady in the past and this slices up PSDs and makes nice GIF/JPEG for webpages but never to convert a picture for the web.

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