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AngelicI couldn't resist photographing this little cherub as I was passing a cemetery today. Appreciate your comments.
EXIF details: 70-300G, 1/2000, f5.6, 145mm, Manual mode The first is the original (slightly cropped): The second is a B&W/Sepia version with some of the distracting background taken out: Simon
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Okay.... give me a few minutes Darryl....
Simon
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One black background for Mr Kipper, coming right up.
How's this? Simon
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Thanks Neeper - I'm pleased you like it, though I probably wouldn't have thought of it if Kipper hadn't suggested it. I'm certainly much happier with the result myself.
I used the Extract filter to select the angel from the sepia version, then created a new document the same dimensions as the original and filled it with black. From there I used the Move tool to transfer the extracted layer into the new document. I find I can be a little more delicate around the edges with the Extract tool. I also played with levels a bit to make the angel blend into the background a little more. Simon
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The finished pic is absolutely beautiful. Well done.
Steve.
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yes, the final version is a 100% keeper!
New page
http://www.potofgrass.com Portfolio... http://images.potofgrass.com Comments and money always welcome
Wow.. I never knew the Extract filter existed.. I just played with it.. pretty cool.
I also like the angel on black.. makes it stand out more. http://www.gleff.com
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Creepers ! Thats brilliant Manta
How are you going to share POTW with Kipper Will be interesting. Mic.
Geez! You go away for dinner, start watching a crappy DVD, pause it 'cos the missus needs a toilet break, check the forum and voila! a STACK of awesome responses!
Thanks everyone for the great wrap - I think I may just get this one printed! Simon
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The angel is beautiful - I actually like the delicate colours painted on her originally.
But the black and white with the black background is very striking. I would never have thought you could extraxt and place in on a black background so convincingly - it doesn't look 'cut-out' at all. Do you feather/modify the selection or do you just let the extract do its thing?
I must admit, this aspect was what drew me to the sculpture in the first place Leigh. It stands about 40 cm tall and is just such a pretty little piece - very angelic!
I use the 'clean-up' tools that are part of the extraction - once you get the hang of them they are pretty impressive. This went a long way towards getting an acceptable edge that didn't look fake. On the final image, I simply went around the outline with a small soft paintbrush in black, just to take off what was left of the hard edge. Seemed to work okay. Thanks for your comments Leigh - I'm very impressed with your portfolio and look forward to meeting you on the Lamington Plateau trip if you're still able to make it. (Apr17) Regards, Simon
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I reckon the black background looks great, but when I was looking at it on my laptops LCD which is coated in dust, it looked like the image had a starry background. As soon as I wiped the dust off it lost some of its magic.
Manta, Could you please photochop in a starry background for me?
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