Well, here's my first upload (edit - now 2 pics here)

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Well, here's my first upload (edit - now 2 pics here)

Postby tasadam on Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:47 am

Hi everyone.
Time to bite the bullet and share the fun I've been having.

Got my camera late December. Recent trip to Wineglass Bay in Tasmania, 1300 odd photos later in 3 days, doing the sorting and found this one that I was PARTICULARLY happy with.

This photo is as it was, no cropping, no photoshopping.
Downsized original photo to 800x531, resultant photo 66Kb.
Nitty gritty -
Focal Length 130 mm
F-Number F 4.2
Exposure Time 1/1250 sec
Metering Mode Pattern
Exposure Program Normal
ISO 200
Focus Mode AF-C
No exposure compensation
No flash

My own criticism - As I had junk on the camera sensor and couldn't get it sent away due to this pending trip, I was using a narrow depth of field, to reduce the evidence of black spot (none present in this photo). The result is the tail feathers perfectly focused but the wings slightly not. It doesn't detract from the photo at all - with the drops of water from the feet and the wave coming in, a fast shutter has probably served the photo better than slightly more depth of field to catch the wings clearer. What do you think?

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Postby birddog114 on Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:49 am

Duck again and again! :shock:
We will have Peking duck for Easter :lol:
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:54 am

The slight blurring of the wing tips adds to the sense of motion IMO. Nice duck :roll:
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Postby dhess on Fri Mar 25, 2005 1:42 pm

Which lens did you use and what focal length?
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Postby bago100 on Fri Mar 25, 2005 2:23 pm

Nice photo Tasadam

I think the tail spread is the human equivalent of reverse thrust :D

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Postby ozimax on Sat Mar 26, 2005 11:33 pm

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Postby tasadam on Sun Mar 27, 2005 4:27 pm

dhess wrote:Which lens did you use and what focal length?

The lens was the 70-300G lens that comes in the kit when you buy the D70 with the 2 lenses (the other being the 18-70). Quite a light weight lens but I like what it can do!
Thanks for the comments and hey Birddog enjoy your peking duck!
A few frames after this pic I took another - the bird in the water took off and they flew together as is here.
I realy like the closeness of the wings to the water, gives it a sense of drama or something.
Cheers
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Mar 27, 2005 5:12 pm

That's quite nice for the 70-300G. i like the way the wings are in opposition to each other, one up, the other down. Great snap. Well done.
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Postby mudder on Sun Mar 27, 2005 6:39 pm

G'day, welcome to the bunch, you can call yourself and old hand now after a couple :)


Really like the second one for great timing. Don;t worry about the dust spots, just practice the healing brush in PS like I do :oops:

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Postby meicw on Sun Mar 27, 2005 8:08 pm

Adam, Welcome. I really like both pics. Well caught.

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Postby tasadam on Fri Apr 01, 2005 4:21 pm

Thanks to those for their comments.
There's a lot of great photos taken by a lot of members!
Oh wouldn't Broadband be nice! Then it wouldn't be so painful looking through them all, er, trying to look anyway.
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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Apr 01, 2005 4:25 pm

Adam - a camera is only a tool and your second photo proves that capturing the moment is something that YOU have done well.
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Postby Deano on Sat Apr 02, 2005 1:42 am

Adam,

I like your shots. I really want to get some good birds-in-flight shots but I have only tried from below and the exposure is a 'mare. You've done a goot job with the birds against the water.

I would crop the sitting bird out of the first one. As for the second I reckon removing the ocean on left, bottom and a smidge off the top would look great. Then you get a tighter crop left and bottom with space right and top for the birds to fly into.

I frequently take copies of shots I see on this forum and try a few crops. Let me know if you want to see what I like for the second shot.

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