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Postby murf59 on Mon Mar 28, 2005 10:38 pm

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Postby Killakoala on Mon Mar 28, 2005 10:41 pm

There's two!!!!!! :) Is that a brick wall i see in the background?

Great pose by the young lady. Your photo could do with a bit more oomph though to do the bride justice. Brides can be very demanding things.

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Postby mudder on Mon Mar 28, 2005 10:54 pm

That works really well... I'd be tempted to clone out the bottom bit of light fitting but good idea, worked for me...
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Postby murf59 on Mon Mar 28, 2005 10:55 pm

Yes it is a brick wall, It's the dividind wall between the two houses it also happens to be the bed room wall. It was taken with the on board flash. I have just recieved my SB600 flash so am looking forward to some experimentind.

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Postby Deano on Tue Mar 29, 2005 5:47 pm

wooossshhhh - the sound of a long standing in-joke going over the head of a not-so-long standing member.

Nice photo Steve. I like the fact that the pose shows off the dress and veil (sp?) from two angles.

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Postby redline on Thu Mar 31, 2005 12:25 pm

i like the shot murf59,
however the brick wall is really not appealing. maybe buy some cheap black paper or clothes and hang it behind her to isolate the bride. remember to stop down to darken the bg.
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Postby Greg B on Thu Mar 31, 2005 12:42 pm

This is the thread where the long standing joke about portraits in front of brick walls was born........

http://forum.d70users.com/viewtopic.php?t=577

Matt's other catch phrase at the time was "Neat and in the middle"

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