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Finally - grapes!

Postby stubbsy on Sun Apr 03, 2005 10:57 pm

Finally after 2 posts of shots from my 3 day visit to the wine regions in North East Victoria I have a shot of some grapes (Allicant Bouche to be precise :wink: ) - and a few pics that aren't of grapes.

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Postby xerubus on Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:03 am

i really like that second shot... and would like to see it with a sepia tone. i'd perhaps straighten it up just a tad to make it look a little more level.

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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:37 am

Peter - the grape shot has beautiful colours
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Postby big pix on Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:49 am

Ah grapes........the start of many a good time........good strong pix's lots of colour and contrast.........except 2 needs to be a bit straighter.......

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Apr 04, 2005 1:40 pm

Mark, Chris, Big Pix

Thanks for the comments. I didn't even notice #2 was crooked when I was cropping it and that's something I'm usually quite careful with. I'll straighten and update the image so the shot above will change and make the straighten it comments redundant :cry:

These three shots really appealed to me because of their vibrancy.

I'll look at sepia for #2 and if it looks good will add the image tonight.
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Postby Geoff on Mon Apr 04, 2005 3:42 pm

Pete - great images, even greater now I'm looking at them on my shiney new 19" CRT monitor..amazing!! Love them all, but my fave is the 2nd one too!

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Apr 04, 2005 3:45 pm

Thanks Geoff. Congrats with the monitor. Makes a huge difference. What you need to do next is calibrate it with a Spyder and you'll be all done :wink:
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Postby Geoff on Mon Apr 04, 2005 3:54 pm

stubbsy wrote:Thanks Geoff. Congrats with the monitor. Makes a huge difference. What you need to do next is calibrate it with a Spyder and you'll be all done :wink:


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Postby big pix on Mon Apr 04, 2005 4:21 pm

I m thirsty......... I think there is a Chardonnay in the fridge, it must be early evening somewhere........

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Postby big pix on Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:08 pm

got side tracked...........now looking for the chardonnay.........
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Apr 05, 2005 12:56 am

I've just straightened the second pic above. Below is the shot in sepia. Don't know about the rest of you, but I prefer the colour version (I like the yellow tree at the end of the right hand side leading line)

Oh and big pix - if you can't find the chardonnay I may have it here :wink:

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Postby Thommo on Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:36 am

the sepia tone does give it a really old look, i really like it. to me it seriously looks like it may have been taken 50+years ago
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