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More Lines, not quite as fresh

Postby dooda on Mon Apr 04, 2005 6:54 pm

This scene got skiied over a bit as it was my third run so the lines are a bit cluttered, but I really like this one as well; it has a sort of grandiose quality to it.

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Hmm, the web version looks a tiny bit soft.

Edit: please comments and critique please.
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Postby Oneputt on Mon Apr 04, 2005 8:49 pm

Well I don't know what your copy looks like but on my monitor the light is really eerie :shock: Nice Image though and in this case a little softness works well.
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Postby dooda on Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:03 pm

yeh, looks much better on the brighter monitor. Maybe still a little dark. I think I'll lighten a little. Thanks.
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Postby dooda on Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:10 pm

Is this a little better. It's a little too bright for the bright monitor, but about right on the monitor that is a little darker. Guess I have to go somewhere in between.

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EDIT Looking at this now, kinda looks surreal.
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Postby Matt. K on Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:48 pm

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First image looked best on my monitor...so go figure? The light has an eerie, mysterious quality and the snow shines.
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Postby KerryPierce on Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:16 pm

FWIW, I like the 2nd one the best. It's an interesting photo, nicely done. :)
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