Sunken Ship

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Sunken Ship

Postby NetMagi on Fri Apr 08, 2005 6:02 am

ok, so it's not really a ship :P

This is my first attempt at keeping some of the color in a shot I've desurated and toned.

Not sure if it's working in this shot, but I think I like the effect anyway.



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Postby Charlie Chalk on Fri Apr 08, 2005 8:25 am

Now before I start, please let it be known I'm by no means an expert, so take this with a liberal pinch of salt if you like!

I would prefer to see a little more colour in the picture, its nearly B&W / nearly colour - sort of caught inbetween.

Also, do you have any more of the shot? I think it would look better with a little less water and a little more trees, so the boat (ship!) was moved down the picture a bit more - so its not sitting quite so central.

I think its a realy interesting picture, the sort of thing I was walking past without a second look before I got my D70, now I'm constantly looking for things I could snap!

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Postby Killakoala on Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:00 pm

I think it works well and well done for thinking outside the circle.

However, a tip is to over-saturate the photo before you create the hue layer so the colour can look a bit brighter as CC suggested. It might not have worked on this pic as it seems to be indicative of 'autumn' so the colours need to be a bit drab to create that effect.

I would have preferred to see no clipping of the boat on the left, but that's just being a bit picky i think.

Great photo and please, do some more for us to see :)
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Postby sheepie on Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:03 pm

I like the colour you have included. It works well. Not sure about the suggestions on cropping - perhaps a little more of the boat on the left would have helped, but maybe there was something else there you didn't want :)

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Postby MCWB on Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:08 pm

Wow, this one is really different because it's so subtle, in contrast to the standard 'red rose on B&W background' type of stuff. I like it! I agree with the others about wanting the whole boat, but sometimes these things happen. :)

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Postby NetMagi on Fri Apr 08, 2005 11:43 pm

sheepie wrote:but maybe there was something else there you didn't want :)

Excuse my ignorance, where is PA?


yep, there was a huge ugly foam cooler visible if I'd shot anymore to the left :(


PA, as MCWB suggested is Pennsylvania, US.

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Postby leek on Sat Apr 09, 2005 9:10 am

NetMagi wrote:
sheepie wrote:but maybe there was something else there you didn't want :)

Excuse my ignorance, where is PA?


yep, there was a huge ugly foam cooler visible if I'd shot anymore to the left :(


PA, as MCWB suggested is Pennsylvania, US.

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It's sometimes better to get the ugly things and clone them out later than to miss part of your subject...

Couldn't resist playing with it... How about this crop?
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