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Playing with water

Postby Aussie Dave on Sat May 07, 2005 3:26 pm

thought I'd have a play around with the SB800 and some macro this morning. I used blue cellophane over the SB800 to give the water some colour. It's far from the greatest waterdrop shot I've seen, but I like it.

Got to love this flash though.....

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The SB800 was used on remote, to the left, with the internal D70 flash acting as Master.

Thoughts/comments appreciated.

Anyone have any tips on focussing ?? I floated a pen in the water and manually focussed, then removed the pen and dropped the water in the same area.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat May 07, 2005 4:29 pm

This is a very interesting shot Dave which I feel has been enhanced by the coloured cel. I would love to know what the actual image is within the drop? Well done - I like it.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sat May 07, 2005 4:36 pm

I like it :) The water drop is sharp already as it is.

Have you tried the repeating flash function on the SB800? the example they gave in the manual was the bouncing ball but I think it would look pretty neat if u had a water drop falling into the pool and creating a splash :)
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Postby Aussie Dave on Sat May 07, 2005 4:37 pm

thanks Chris. The setup was done in the bathroom sink and I kept getting a reflection of the tap, so I put a blue towel around it. This is what shows up in the water droplet.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat May 07, 2005 5:12 pm

Interesting Dave - actually I think it would look kinda neat with the tap showing in the drop :D
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Postby yeocsa on Mon May 09, 2005 10:20 am

Hi

Great shot there. Excellent timing.

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Postby stubbsy on Mon May 09, 2005 10:45 am

Dave

I think this shot is excellent and the idea of the blue cellophane is clever. Certainly makes for a more interesting shot. I guess I really need to spend some more dollars and get me an SB800 - didn't realise that you could use flash to "freeze frame" things (of course I should have since that's effectively what strobe lights do) :cry:
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Postby flipfrog on Mon May 09, 2005 1:12 pm

Aussie Dave

what an amazing capture....
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Postby Catcha on Mon May 09, 2005 2:09 pm

Nice shot, looks like picture for and ad. All you need now is some captions to go with it to complete it :D
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Postby Aussie Dave on Mon May 09, 2005 2:15 pm

Catcha wrote:Nice shot, looks like picture for and ad. All you need now is some captions to go with it to complete it :D


Perhaps:

"Evian - the first drop is never your last !"

:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Catcha on Mon May 09, 2005 2:20 pm

Aussie Dave wrote:
Catcha wrote:Nice shot, looks like picture for and ad. All you need now is some captions to go with it to complete it :D


Perhaps:

"Evian - the first drop is never your last !"

:lol: :lol: :lol:
 LOL that's the one :D
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Postby gecko on Mon May 09, 2005 2:29 pm

This is a really nice photo.

Newbie question: Could you have captured this with a flash mounted ontop of the camera?

I'm thinking of getting a flash and am steering towards the SB600 mainly for its attractive price with Birddog. I don't think the 600 can be used off the camera... am I right in thinking this?

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Postby Aussie Dave on Mon May 09, 2005 2:36 pm

Hi Gecko
the SB600 can be used off camera like the SB800, however the 600 cannot control other flashes. it can only be used as a slave.

You could probably capture this shot with the flash on the camera, not sure if you'd see any shadows behind the water drop or not ??? I thought it made for more interesting lighting being used off camera to the side.
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Postby Jenno on Mon May 09, 2005 2:37 pm

Peter,

Given your comments above, there must be some doubt that Arek will receive his SB800 for winning the previous competition given you are the delivery boy? :lol:

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