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Part II: A glass of RGB please.Here is a further attempt of my first glass of RGB. This time most of the lines are straight... which isn't as easy to do as you think...
I'm still not 100% happy with this yet... but here's proof i'm still working on the project. comments most welcome. cheers http://www.markcrossphotography.com - A camera, glass, and some light.
As it is the shot has no meaning............... sorry
big pix Cheers ....bp....
Difference between a good street photographer and a great street photographer.... Removing objects that do not belong... happy for the comments, but .....Please DO NOT edit my image..... http://bigpix.smugmug.com Forever changing
that's fine bp.... as i said .. not 100% happy yet.... what i don't like about this shot is that i stuffed up the lighting as compared to the previous... the plexi is visible which is a big no no.... cheers mate.. http://www.markcrossphotography.com - A camera, glass, and some light.
The lighting isn't the only issue, like Phillipb said the composition (camera angle relative to the glass and plexiglass) is much better. You have a lower angle in the 1st shot and close (using a wide angle) that makes the glass bulge out at you. Also lower to the plexiglass gives the mirror finish.
Darryl (aka Kipper)
Nikon D200
thanks for the comments guys.....
cheers http://www.markcrossphotography.com - A camera, glass, and some light.
HiDifficult? Try diamonds! It's 100 times more challenging.
Hard to guess what is the effect that you are after. If you don't know what you are after, you won't know if it is the desired effect. If you are trying to show how the curved glass distort the straight colums of green, red and blue - you can crop off the glass table. You are using 3 lights. These lights are direct lights. Lights that fall on the glass directly resulting in good colour saturation. However, the reflection on the glass table is alot less and thus looks washed out. I can see the lights reflection on the glass - a distraction. The lightings are uneven. Both green and blue suffers from insufficient lighting - esp. the Green. regards, Arthur
I missed the first one, but I like what you're up to with this. Knowing your work, it'll be A-1 when you're done and you'll have learned a lot of tricks along the way.
Hard work pays off in the future. Laziness pays off now.
Shooting glass on glass is not easy .......... you need to do it in a black room so you can control your reflections and highlights......... or lots of black reflectors.........
cheers bp Cheers ....bp....
Difference between a good street photographer and a great street photographer.... Removing objects that do not belong... happy for the comments, but .....Please DO NOT edit my image..... http://bigpix.smugmug.com Forever changing
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